Harry Potter: Toji Potter

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WRizz1

Hope you enjoy this and comment, drop Stones and review. It doesn’t take too much time 😁

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Jay0Kay

The entire story feels rushed and practically screams ai generated

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JaxWolf4

Toji spotted.

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Danule

ok so I have thoughts. first this is your story you do you. having said that a couple things stand out. one is that there is no detail on the how or why of the matter, just he "did it". I've only got to chapter ten and can see several loopholes. first, how did he get to the leaky cauldron, how did he get the respect of the goblins, how did he immediately identify Daphne. so on and so fourth. there is no how. on the other hand. the actions of the background charaters make no sense. like at all. not at any point have I seen a reaction beyond " OMG HE AMAZING". not that that can't happen but it goes back to WHY. what is the thought process of them making there, kinda ridiculous, choices. I think the premise of the story as huge potential. but needs more thought put into it. I think you can make a real entertaining story with a little more time and practice.

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AlexPendragon

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nameless_blade

well this novel has its unique take on harry potter , but I am sure its written by an stupid oldman who just keep yapping everything and anything.

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FluffyPanda44

Just your average OP reincarnate fanfic with confusing story developments. It also seems like it’s also a harem.