Webnovel Author: ETsnomx - Fanfic Collection

Im very appreciate

Overall the story is bad (i dropped around chapter 84). All the crying, all the pov changing that just ruined my experience. Whats the point of the opening drama? I dont know. Whats the point of the power scaling? I dont know. Whats the point of status panel took the 1/4 chapter length? I DONT FKING KNOW. This novel touched some fetishes if me and i like that a lot but the writing style and the slice of life aspect just bad, real bad. If you want to know how to forge some dagger, kinfe that take 2 whole goddamn chapters (without anything exciting kept me reading) then this novel is for you. If you want to switch from current timeline to the past (around 12 chapters) to tell the readers the mc trauma then dont so it abruptly. Why did you want the reader feel sympathy (even pathetic) to the mc? I really found it hard to fathom TLDR: Bad novel. The author just go with the flow and write anything poped up in his mind

good novels although the silly start with shota, men of culture should read this, lots of tags if you know what i mean. Many jap, terminology with copy rights references fyi

too many big words and lot of unnecessary explain, for example, you can describe the surrounding for 1-2 paragraphs but in this novel it is dragged out to 3-4 paragraphs with difference words. Sometimes it is so frustrated to read, like you are reading a philosophy book (i'm not english native btw)

it's just good, everything is good except some turn of events, some too fast, feel like a chapter was cut away. The smut..... is goddamn awesome, not some witty-nitty stupid brads boasting nonsense but good psychological counters. Definitely the best futa novel so far

In general, the story is quite slow, just like a slice of life thingy (not that too slow) and it kinda boring to read. The MC is a novel author (famous one) but his characteristic i must say..... so annoying childish, innocent (sweet? what the hell with this obsession? It doesn't even make sense and i swear it god damn annoying on long run of this novel). This novel might be for some 13-14 years old to read (some kind of friendship power, flashback power that cringy thing). The MC is a futa (i like futa) BUT there are not much 18+ scene so i quite dissappointed (chap 130 for the first time sex?? the author must be an ethic boy with 18 years old to have sex, lame). Summary, just don't think any philosophy, complicated story development (for senior readers ofc), read it with relax mind and don't smash at screen for repetive sweet annoying (which i almost did). I drop at chap 94, too tired and bored to keep on