Johnathon_Inman_2987

21 days ago

Commented

you put 45M twice

Before setting off, Xu Yuan spent 150,000 intimidation points to upgrade his monster control range to 45 by 45 meters. He had to admit, intimidation points were consumed pretty quickly. All the points he had painstakingly saved up during the day were now gone just to expand his control radius.

Minecraft: I Am The Demon King

Video Games · AmbitiousTransltor

Johnathon_Inman_2987

1 months ago

Commented

trained

"They are our main force, the Blood of Uzumaki, a group of teenager who traint to protect our home and family."

Uzumaki: I can comprehend anything

Anime & Comics · IWhoLevelUp

Johnathon_Inman_2987

9 months ago

Commented

doable, probly forgot the space "do able"

To enhance his kenjutsu skill, Yomi and Ryota also had to fight in close quarters, but since their opponent was a genin only, it was doable

Naruto: Chronicles of a Fire Ninja

Fantasy · FirstHokage

Johnathon_Inman_2987

9 months ago

Commented

prepared "food" for them?

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Naruto: Chronicles of a Fire Ninja

Fantasy · FirstHokage

Johnathon_Inman_2987

10 months ago

Commented

the "boy"?

Digging into his pocket, the bow ten-year-old boy took out five credits, giving them to the shopkeep and taking the candle.

Star wars: I don't want to be a Jedi

Anime & Comics · Itsame_Mario

Johnathon_Inman_2987

10 months ago

Commented

"a little big," probably ment "a little bit"

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Dragon Ball Z: The Core

Anime & Comics · Aeon0

Johnathon_Inman_2987

11 months ago

Commented

forgot to add "not", or a word with similar meaning. "she could not move large objects, or her self".

She simply seemed to not have many talents in the Jutsu, as while she could teleport small objects to the markers she created, she could move larger objects, let alone herself yet.