The_Idiotic_Prince

first of all the writing quality is good and the flow of the story is to my liking. usually i don't like too much paced story as it might lose base so yeah that's a plus too as the time has given for story development. so overall it is a good novel to read.

I will fix the grammar mistakes and will work on the POV,thanks for review

Thanks, i am still new to writing but will make sure that quality gets better!!

SO as far i see the story has good potential. if you are a scifi fan you should give it a try. as for charaacter desingn its good so far, a little more could be added though. there are some gramatical mistakes, so you should take care of that. Keep the good work.

I am a fan of OP MC so I like seeing this, As for the story, its very good so far, and the writing quality is also good. In some places, some paras are a little stretched but other than that it's best. First time seeing FL so far liked it. if you are a fan of female Lead then you'll love the story!!!

The story starts with a bang and seeing that makes you hyped. I like how you used the POV to describe the story of the book. There are some typos in places, if you make them up the story is fabulous.