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1 years ago
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The story is better than many other web novels. I am still reading it though I have not reached to the recent updated chapters. Power system has some improvements. There are many points to be seen in other reviews. One drawback that I would like to point is that the cautiousness of the MC is not upto par with a person in late twenties, as that is what is said about his age before reincarnation. He is freely revealing his skills when he should take more caution against it. He doesn't gets heavily penalised for his lack of caution which I can only attribute to plot armour. But it is in a acceptable range

1 years ago
Posted

The translation seems to have stopped after chapter 40. Rest of the chapters seem to be machine translated. But I still red over 100 chapters and it was pretty good except a few simulations in the novel seem to be inconsistent even after the explanation provided. For one such, wherein he is pursued by Rong corporation, there was no explanation. I don't want to give a spoiler so I won't go into details

1 years ago
Commented

This chapter seems a bit rushed. I know that the Author might not want to spend a lot of chapters on setting the premise and background, as the Mc was the grandson of a prime minister in his previous life the changes to his character should have been a bit slow.

1 years ago
Posted

Poor writing quality and lack of attention onto the details told before. It seems that the author has some incidents set in his mind but the flow between them is not good

2 years ago
Posted

There's a thing about this novel's characters and shaking heads. I think on an average every chapter has at least 2 times mentioning shaking heads(inwardly or not). People may perceive it differently but for me, it was became quite annoying after a few hundred chapters.

2 years ago
Commented

Very good twist! As I was reading it, I started to feel hollow. Compared to the chapters before in this novel, this chapter is the best.

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2 years ago
Commented

What happened Author? Will there not be further chapters?

2 years ago
Commented

I am wondering that if David breaks prison with Parul and runs away, then won't all his guild members be caught and interrogated as they are supposed to be close friends and suspected to be accomplices? Then again, other members may get out of it easily as they have good connections except Elandor. Then he may have to call upon the support of Aushima and Rose

2 years ago
Commented

This MC can build a sect i think

2 years ago
Commented

He can use if excuse of learning from the captured elementalist as a reason fro his earth manipulation magic skill