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The Age of Celestials has arrived.
In the world where Vincent was sent into, the existence of Celestial Beings greatly stimulated the advancement of humanity. With their help, the humans started breaking out of their shackles as they exceeded the limitations of their mortal bodies.
They have passed down mana cultivation techniques and various combat arts increasing their strength as they fought against the true enemies of the world…
However, as Vincent was sent by his grandfather to complete a very unusual mission, he learned that these majestic Celestial Beings weren’t gods or existences out of his reach… They were actually tools or weapons that humans have been using for their own greed. More than that, he discovered the true origin of the Celestials!
Hence, with the help of his System, he mounted a rebellion…
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- กาสร้างตัวละคร
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I haven't finished the story yet and I'm only in the process of reading it but it's really good so far. besides a few grammar errors and maybe a bit odd on the pacing only at some points though it's an amazing novel. great job author keep up the good work and for anyone wondering what this novel is I will probably give a full detailed review once I finish all the available chapters
One of the best novels here. The plot is really well written. The only thing that I don't like too much is the way the MC makes money, most of the times that he needs it, there would be no really good explanation and poof, there is the money, even though with his abilities that are perfect for money making, we have no exploration of such chapters.
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I have read up to the current arc, mostly with free pass, so do pardon me. As much as the concept of this story is good, the writing quality and ideas seems to diminish after a while. First was the sudden marriage thing but later handled cleanly. Second was the sudden lack of magic talent which was supposed to apply to the original Vicent only. It was clear his magic talent was way to superior to most mana practitioners but suddenly, he cant learn next tier mana arts. Third was the sudden blindness which makes no sense and adds little to none to the story. From that point onward, ita like the story just go along with the flow; 'whatever comes'. It became bland without any substantial goal or target. The only end time target is the celestials which also seems bland as things are added as time goes by. There is also no short term target. Vicent just do whatever fits. The romance is also all over the place. Honestly, Yulia would have been a good option along the way but later thrown off. The romance is like a switch, on and off, new and old, and so on. Update stability is really high up there but the story quality dropped really low. Also, some characters are not properly fleshed out, they are more like 'add or do as needed' instead of a 3 dimensional character design. Anyway, I am still hoping for some improvement. If these can be worked on, the story will have a massive improvement and will definently skyrocket. Don't mind my grammar and thanks for the chapters.
mc's brain doesn't work. mc moves with his emotions. mc beta plays mc.hero.mc tries to die early. system is in the wrong person's hands again :D
Author here! This book is a story about an Enhancer meeting Celestials ( but Sekirei inspired ), Mana, Waifu, Sects and Clans, Barbarians, Mythical Creatures, advanced things and others as he slowly discovers the truth about this world. Is this really a world of sword and magic.. or nah? Anyway, definitely not an OP MC but weak to strong. Aside from that, the System Concept of this is a bit hard core and you'll notice it in just a few chapters. I hope you enjoy reading this as I enjoy writing it. Please leave a review to help this book a little bit if you can. Thanks! xlntz.
The start was amazing and the concept was unique and had a good thing going for it. The change in story to an unnecessary school arc and going blind for no reason other than to try and make a deeper story ruined it and did nothing but make the writer seem like he ran out of ideas. The use of the cliche aranged marriage and having that go down the drain because some unforseen consequences was also annoying and heavily dissapointing. tl;dr - Started as a 4.5/5 dropped to a 2.6/5 Sad to see it happen.
He turns blind and the entire plot just stops dead. The story at this point feels like the author is just padding. Important plot points are dropped, character progression takes a nose dive. And the whole clan thing with his fiance just made no sense. I skimmed through another 40 chapters and it's just bleh. How is this rated above 3 stars?
So currently I have no idea how u have yet to review already and for seemingly forgetting I'm sorry. This book is amazing! Ok I have been waiting a while for Vincent to reach the zemin clan but finally we are on the cusp on it. Though don't think from this that the novel is slow. It isn't, the fights are amazing and the character and world development is insane! I'm awed and is always waiting for the next chapter to be released. So please do not drop the book. Author its amazing and I love it!
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You can give this a try if you nothing great to read. I found some actions of MC very stupid and couldn't bring myself to read this novel any further.
I really feel like certain aspects of the story are just taking away from it. I quite liked the story until the blindness part when it stopped having a MC. after becoming blind it really feels like its 1 chapter about Vincent and 2 chapters about the world. the blindness itself was fairly forced and lasts forever with no reasonable purpose/story benefit. does he grow from being blind? not really does the story progress due to the blindness? only ending the engagement Does the blindness have a defined purpose within any reasonable timeframe? absolutely not. 100 chapters later still blind having almost the same problems as before and more than half the chapters are not about the mc. Another in a long list of 150 chapters that are pretty good and a steep drop off after that. for me as soon as he went blind the focus became the world not the MC. At least half the story from that point became about others acting around him with short bits about his activities. I dont mind the duel but having a 100+ chapter challenge that really seems to make the mc almost irrelevant killed the story for me.
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interesting set up.i think i already have an idea about the celestials. please upload next chapter faster. thanks!!!!! keep it up! [img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp][img=fp]
i have just started reading this book. The story is pretty good. I am more curious of what happens next. First chapter already got my attention. goodluck author!
Great Story! This was the first time after years of reading Webnovel stories that I bought coins and spend them on a story. Great job author, looking forward to read more!
Better than nearly any other on this site. Having read more than 300 chapters I can say these: + No cringe-edge lord characteuhrs currently + Interesting plot + Interesting power and system of the mc + Story is progressing nicely + Power is balanced and follow the logic. If mc defeats someone it is because he is higher leveled than them and also has strong items. Nothing like other novels where the story continuously say that level is the strongest but mc defeats 20 lvl higher people easily or 2 realm higher ones.
Dont mind my rating, I gave it all 5 star because I only just started and it's good, currently at chapter 20. I can't rate it bad as I dont see anything bad in it. The o my two things I am confident in rating is the writing quality and story development, both are really great. Though, story development is a bit slow now but its understandable as the foundation needs to be properly laid. That said, this book is a HIDDEN GEM!!. But no one comments about it, I guess not many people have seen this book yet. Up to where I have read, I can assure you that it's pretty much well done and intriguing. It has a lot of potential, I mean ALOT..
good casual read. writing is good. a bit slow pace but understandable. keep it up. i cant get privilege but i will use my fast pass. keep writing author. :)
A good book. I would suggest adding some more background details. Other than that, story development is good, character building is ok. Though, you could add a bit more emotional attachment. Writing Quality is good too.
Better than nearly any other on this site. Having read to the 90th chapter I can say these: + No cringe-edge lord characters currently + Interesting plot + Interesting power and system of the mc + Story is progressing nicely + Power is balanced and follow the logic. If mc defeats someone it is because he is higher leveled than them and also has strong items. Nothing like other novels where the story continuously say that level is the strongest but mc defeats 20 lvl higher people easily or 2 realm higher ones.