Aliast

Aliast

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Human Being, Dream Alchemist, Chief of Quietly Judging, Master of None.

2021-07-27 เข้าร่วมแล้ว Indonesia
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Aliast
Aliast
2 years ago
Replied to cuttie_Mickey1968

Apologize for the long absence, I was abroad for weeks and just got back home. It saddened me, but I plan to end it here. Have to write my other novels next month. So sorry to say this - I just haven't got the time to change its completion status :'(

Aliast
Aliast
2 years ago
Replied to cuttie_Mickey1968

Thank you :D

Aliast
Aliast
2 years ago
Commented

Dewi, eaea

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Moon Goddess Cursed on Alpha

Moon Goddess Cursed on Alpha

Fantasy · HANA_PUSPARINI

Aliast
Aliast
2 years ago
Commented

Pretty good start, but it could be better. Some sentences are quite long, perhaps you can shorten them. Though, you may want to be careful with your - how to say it... (pemenggalan kalimatnya?). Anyway, good luck! :D

Aliast
Aliast
2 years ago
Commented

Ex-beta? So, it's like rank where people can be replaced after some times?

As an ex-betha, her mother is much more aware of the problems that often arise while on duty. That's why the queen gave her a talisman necklace because it was proven to protect her when she was in danger. Even though her mother was in danger, for Keren's birth mother the most important thing was that her daughter was safe and would carry on the task that the white wolf queen had not accomplished. If the queen's life is threatened, the queen will keep her daughter because Keren is also predicted by the queen as a future queen.

Moon Goddess Cursed on Alpha

Moon Goddess Cursed on Alpha

Fantasy · HANA_PUSPARINI

Aliast
Aliast
2 years ago
Commented

If he's weak, why is he an alpha?

Renji is thirty years old. Renji is Alpha, even though he is weak but Keren is always helpful when tracking the whole village and guarding the island. Keren is also an expert on location maps.

Moon Goddess Cursed on Alpha

Moon Goddess Cursed on Alpha

Fantasy · HANA_PUSPARINI

Aliast
Aliast
2 years ago
Commented

Wah, padahal menurutku healer itu job yg paling menguntungkan. Kalau main game juga selalu pilih yg ada skill healing-nya. Dasar Yugala, mainnya kurang jauh kamu nak

Aliast
Aliast
Aliast
2 years ago
Replied to cuttie_Mickey1968

Something came up and I couldn't do daily update, but I'm fine. Very sorry about that. Thanks for your support :D

Aliast
Aliast
2 years ago
Commented

dateng njemput, langsung masuk kabin, dan bikin geger satu pesawat. cliche, tapi moga aja ada kehebohan yg tak terprediski. tiba2 ada bom di pesawat dan si jendral berubah jd hero, misalnya :'D

  • Tales of the Kingslayer original

    Tales of the Kingslayer

    Fantasy ACTION ADVENTURE REINCARNATION MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG ISEKAI APOCALYPSE WIZARDS BEAST TAMING

    4.65

    The lights inside the train flickered, and Heon was suddenly alone, saved from a dead body missing an arm and a mysterious cloaked man. He was trapped in the train running circle. A loop without a stop. The mysterious cloaked man proposed a deal. He would stop the train for Heon, but only after retrieving a missing key in the other realm. Accepting it, Heon woke up with a newly-attached black hand formerly belonged to the dead body on the train. He was teleported to a world of magic and sword. One where the most powerful king was murdered, and the blood-thirsty queen hunted for the assassin. Unfortunately, he found drawings of his face plastered all over the city. Wanted: Dead or Alive. Heon Lightwalker - the Kingslayer. At least, he got Sunny; an alleged murderer slash healer mage, and Azran; a bounty hunter who now stuck by his side due to unwanted association with him. Hopefully, they could survive the kingdom-wide manhunt. But, how would he find the key to fulfill his deal, when the key was going to be used to release the Great End? Was exchanging a key to his own real world equal to ending this parallel one?

    74 Chs 224 คอลเลกชัน

  • All Systems Are Broken original

    All Systems Are Broken

    Fantasy ACTION ROMANCE ADVENTURE R18 SYSTEM MAGIC WEAKTOSTRONG TRANSMIGRATION SURVIVAL ISEKAI

    Liel Leinster – formerly named Will Leinster – was not a believer in the system. Throughout his life, the system had always been against his favor. From rejecting his job applications just because he was in prison once to ruling his girlfriend Naomi Gardner's deadly hit and run as a simple accident due to the driver being the Minister of Law's son. He took rightful revenge by killing Erik Fowler – Naomi's murderer. Dying alone, he was welcoming the cold embrace of death when– [Congratulations!] [You have been chosen randomly to receive a 1 month's free trial of the System.] Liel found himself free-falling from the sky with an incessant System trying to help him navigate his so-called second chance at life. He refused to accept it at first. However, with the knowledge that Erik was also there using his very own System, Liel had no choice but to accept. Driven by his deep-rooted hatred, Liel vowed to kill Erik once again and for all. It should be easy, but it wasn't. Aside from the fact that Erik chose an avatar and entirely became a different person – while he refused to live here, the System insisted that it broke because of him. [Error.] [Failed to draw Stormguard Sabre.] [Poor you. Better luck next time.] [You want to draw Blazefury Battle Scythe instead?] "Just give me a damn weapon!" [Okay, chill, buddy. No need to get your knickers in a twist.] [Drawing Blazefury Battle–] [Error.] [Drawing Scorchvine Wand.] "A fucking wand in a sword fight? Seriously, you wanker?!" The only highlight? Naomi was still alive. At least Naomi's counterpart of this universe. To keep her so, Liel tagged along in her journey to search for Celestia Shifting Frost – a water fountain the legend said was capable of purifying every curse known. Thus, he had two objections. First, make Naomi falls in love with him again by finding the water fountain to purify the village. Second, serve his revenge on Erik and kill him for all. However, one question remained unanswered. What would happen once the System's one-month free trial ran out of time?

    19 Chs 254 คอลเลกชัน

  • Me, Raven, and the Scandalous Summer original

    Me, Raven, and the Scandalous Summer

    Urban R18 COMEDY SLICEOFLIFE DRAMATIC SWEET

    Elio Greys, a newly-hired screenwriter, is trapped between the devil and the deep blue sea in the Nevertale Entertainment production house. There is Raven Coldwell, the chairman’s grandson whom she help to get through a panic attack but violently accuse her of taking advantage of him. And there is Alfie Summer, a rising star who thrives with his villain roles, but a sweetheart behind the scene. How can she survive being in the same film production with those two? Oh, has she mention, that both of them refuse to stay away from her, for some unknown reason? And that one of them has Dissociative Identity Disorder? Now, her life is complete – ly ruined! Or, is it?

    5 Chs 4 คอลเลกชัน

  • Mafia Lord's Librarian: A Satire of Love at First Sight original

    Mafia Lord's Librarian: A Satire of Love at First Sight

    Urban COMEDY CEO POSSESSIVE LOVEATFIRSTSIGHT FIRSTLOVE SWEET MAFIA CRUSH

    เสร็จสมบูรณ์

    Keira Hawkins thought that the new library patron, Nate, was disgusted by the birthmark decorating her face. But then, he asked to go on a date with her during their next meeting. The innocence of love at the first sight turned dangerously annoying when Nate refused to leave her side. Thankfully, with a mean slap to the face, done rightly in public by her mighty right hand, had rendered Nate to cease his nonsensical doings. And yet... One unsuspecting morning, she woke up on the most comfortable bed, in an unfamiliar room, cradled in the arms of a gorgeous man she crowned as the most annoying patron of the week. "You're the one who came to me," whispered Nathaniel Wolfe – the mafia lord who reigns over the east side of the country. It wouldn't be easy to shake him off. Moreover when she found a locked door in the library basement - the entrance to where some lost treasures were hidden in the maze, or so Nate said. Intrigued, Keira joined Nate on his quest to find the lost treasures before another mafia family find it first.

    119 Chs 150 คอลเลกชัน

  • Multiple Lovers in One Body original

    Multiple Lovers in One Body

    Urban

    Elio Siraditya bertemu dengan seorang pria aneh yang mengganggunya di dalam kereta. Dia balik mengerjainya. “Berhenti kau, gadis jalang!” Sial. Dia ketahuan. Elio berharap mereka tidak akan bertemu lagi. Sayang, ayahnya yang teramat baik berkata, "Kasihan, dia menangis di toilet." Karenanya, Sangkala Dharmayudha – si pria tampan yang nampak kaya namun tak tahu malu itu – pulang bersama mereka. Seiring berjalannya waktu, Elio menyadari keanehan lain dalam diri Kala. Kepribadiannya sering berubah-ubah. Kala berkata dia mungkin mempunyai kepribadian ganda, sebuah penyakit mental bernama Dissociative Identity Disorder. Terdengar asing, Elio lebih percaya kalau Kala hanya jahil atau malah kerasukan setan hingga berhari-hari lamanya. Beruntung, masalah yang dialami Kala menjadi sumber inspirasi Elio agar bisa keluar dari jerat maut bagi penulis; Writer's Block. Karena bagaimana pun juga, dia harus mendapatkan penghargaan 'Fanfiction of the Year' yang sudah diimpikannya sejak dua tahun yang lalu. Namun, lambat laun Elio mulai memendam rasa pada tiga dari enam kepribadian Kala. Hal itu memicu kerumitan lain pada hidup Elio. "Kau harus memilih salah satu di antara kami." ___ #romance #comedy #humor #lovestory #mentalhealth #dissociativeidentitydisorder #did #kepribadianganda #psikologi #author #writer #badboy #wibu #ceo #drama #romansa #enemiestolovers #lovehaterelationship #polyamory

    16 Chs 15 คอลเลกชัน