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All Systems Are Broken

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Liel Leinster – formerly named Will Leinster – was not a believer in the system.

Throughout his life, the system had always been against his favor. From rejecting his job applications just because he was in prison once to ruling his girlfriend Naomi Gardner's deadly hit and run as a simple accident due to the driver being the Minister of Law's son.

He took rightful revenge by killing Erik Fowler – Naomi's murderer.

Dying alone, he was welcoming the cold embrace of death when–

[Congratulations!]

[You have been chosen randomly to receive a 1 month's free trial of the System.]

Liel found himself free-falling from the sky with an incessant System trying to help him navigate his so-called second chance at life.

He refused to accept it at first. However, with the knowledge that Erik was also there using his very own System, Liel had no choice but to accept.

Driven by his deep-rooted hatred, Liel vowed to kill Erik once again and for all.

It should be easy, but it wasn't.

Aside from the fact that Erik chose an avatar and entirely became a different person – while he refused to live here, the System insisted that it broke because of him.

[Error.]

[Failed to draw Stormguard Sabre.]

[Poor you. Better luck next time.]

[You want to draw Blazefury Battle Scythe instead?]

"Just give me a damn weapon!"

[Okay, chill, buddy. No need to get your knickers in a twist.]

[Drawing Blazefury Battle–]

[Error.]

[Drawing Scorchvine Wand.]

"A fucking wand in a sword fight? Seriously, you wanker?!"

The only highlight?

Naomi was still alive. At least Naomi's counterpart of this universe.

To keep her so, Liel tagged along in her journey to search for Celestia Shifting Frost – a water fountain the legend said was capable of purifying every curse known.

Thus, he had two objections. First, make Naomi falls in love with him again by finding the water fountain to purify the village. Second, serve his revenge on Erik and kill him for all.

However, one question remained unanswered.

What would happen once the System's one-month free trial ran out of time?

Parents Strongly Cautioned
  1. BlueAster
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  2. weinbergh
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    Popsicklez ให้ความสนใจ 3

สถานะพลังงานรายสัปดาห์

Rank -- การจัดอันดับด้วยพลัง
Stone -- หินพลัง

คุณอาจชอบ

4รีวิว

  • คุณภาพงานเขียน
  • ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
  • การดำเนินเรื่อง
  • กาสร้างตัวละคร
  • พื้นหลังโลก

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GodOfTwoPaths

I'll be honest. the way it's being written gives me an absolute headache. I'll keep reading up until it becomes premium to see if it gets better. if it does I'll change my review. please fix your writing style .

2yr
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luckyman

The sypnosis already gives you a headache and annyoing vibes ……………………………………………l……………………………………. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

2yr
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SIENDONIA

A system book? I'm in‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎‎

2yr
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gracened

A rather fresh story with system in it. The world building is pretty good as we got glimpses of it. The main character is not the best and obviously not OP with logic that went through the roof, but the attention to details and continued improvement makes it better. Pacing is good so far, not too fast nor slow, and enough tease for me to keep reading. I actually have a high expectation for this novel. Good work, author!

2yr
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