I have read 150 chapters, and though the story is interesting and well thought out(only minor plotholes) the writing quality is bad, especially when it comes to keeping the gender the same and names for realms(kingdoms? idk). I have not read a single chapter that has not made the mistake of either saying "...boy.. something" and then in the same paragraf refer to him as her or where kingdoms are called realms, or realms called kingdoms.
30'000 x 10 = 300'000* not 3 million
Axel had around 30,000 soldiers in the north zone when he was the zone commander. With a simple estimation and Kanto league being 10 times larger, Axel would need around 3,000,000 team members which was simply not possible.
Pokemon - A real story
Anime & Comics · TheSilverPrince
What does this even mean? Such a weirdly written condition.
-The user couldn't physically interact with anything he wasn't in contact with prior to the intangibility's skill activation.
HxH: adventure of a lifetime
Anime & Comics · Old_Fart_3269
only for the what?... neck? I am thoroughly perplexed about it could be.
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Born in Blood
Fantasy · CovidCandy
from a few seconds* to five minutes
Beedrill had been trying hard to control its size to 10 feet permanently. After so many hours of training, it could hold itself to 10 feet for 5 minutes. This was a joyous occasion for Axel. From a few minutes to 5 minutes was a massive improvement. 'Calm mind' and 'Minimize' had also leveled up a bit.
Pokemon - A real story
Anime & Comics · TheSilverPrince
uncle lotus*? why would Mars call himself uncle while speaking to someone else? or am i missing something?
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Black Clover : The Last Legacy
Anime & Comics · Immortle_diablo123
Thanks for the chapter!
Good cap!
The old man had a carefree smile on his face as he had his sword out. He didn't even move when Ace landed a punch on him. But it was blocked by with only one of his fingers, which was of course coated in Haki. Though his figure didn't touch the flames at all.
000X000
Anime & Comics · Fallen_Crown
I have not stopped reading, I just wanted new readers to be aware of what to expect, and though the problem with the characters being called by the wrong gender does get a bit confusing and irritating at times I still enjoy the story! The only thing I can recommend it to ask someone to proof read the chapters.
the monarch
Fantasy · Zetronys