000X000

LV 1

TheArzaBoy

Esto es simplemente GOD, no me habia sentido tan emocionado leyendo un libro desde Reborn a Enel, Bro si puedes Terminarlo a tu propio ritmo por que yo seguirle leyendolo. (Ya es como la 4 vez que lo vuelvo a releerlo).

LV 4

Saad_Ur_Rahman

alright am 345 chapters in , you love one piece ? read this , the au is strong , you are in good hands with this author

LV 5

Zaelum

Pretty good! Here for you! [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

LV 14

WolfLord

very interesting and enjoyable read still embracing the Luffy character while also making it his own version one criticism is the chapters are a bit short but the writer makes up with that by releasing 2 a day I really recommend people read this is a very good read

LV 14

White_Clown

since this is ‘Real Life’ difficulty, will his crew also change? we cannot sure that he'll sail and meet other characters precisely similar with original based level selected. Also, will he form a gang that will become member in Goa Kingdom (like Grey Terminal's kid, original character)? also normally, someone won't using small boat like Luffy did especially guy who cannot swim.

LV 4

i_dont_know_if_he

Just for the fact that you gave "Whitebeard" an actual White Beard, five stars. Bravo...

LV 4

Dark_PersonJJ

Nami is first .who will be next.Robin.?maybe Vivi.?.I hope MC will have a lover later one

LV 4

BurgerNight

The grammar is on point, and there are rarely mistakes, and even then, nothing major. The only thing I can't stand is the slow pace. I am at chapter 26 and the MC hasn't even started his journey but is still training on Dawn island. Boring af

LV 4

NoneAbove

what happened book it disappears or something ? I just opened it gone somewhere ? (10:23 am)Date: sat,8, june for me

LV 4

Dark_PersonJJ

Are thare Lemons.?.Is this a Harem.?.I wana ask.since Most One Piece FF have it.

LV 4

Hasan_Shopnil

I love this fan-fic....Please solve this Monkey D. Mario naming problem of the Marines.Also Please let Luffy learn Hassoken,King Punch,Red Hawk,Conqueror Coating,Emission and Internal Destruction,Diable Jambe (Red Hawk Kick Version),Also recruit Yamato and Carrot (maybe Ulti) in the crew along with the original crew....please don't recruit Buggy,Gin (debatable),Collect a lot of different dials from Skypia like Impact,Tone,,Reject,Axe,Flame,Ball,Breath,Eisen,Milky,Flash,Heat,Flavor,Jet,Lamp,Vision,Thunder,Control,Mad,Water etc. Dials and make upgraded Thousand Sunny.Also let a lot of characters like Bell-mere,Titi,Olivia,Hiriluk,Tom,Otohime,Rosinante,Lami (Law's sister),Sora,Toki etc. be alive in future.Also let luffy collect Pure Gold and also let a lot of movie part be in It....I really love the fic...keep up the good work and release more chapters much faster.

LV 12

MSK2609

for those wondering why there is no chapters, it's probably due to copyright sanctions because the author was making money on patreon with a fanfiction when the original story which is one piece doesn't belong to him

LV 4

UNCHAINED_PREDATOR

the only negative things of this fanfic are the pacing and the chapter lenght.

LV 14

LongNi

What was the name of this book because I forgot

LV 5

DanThunder

what happend why delete? TT_TT Waaahh I just.started re reading

LV 3

andrew12_7300

i love this fanfic so far i hope you don't drop it

LV 1

Drako_0692

The beginning is quite slow and there are many modifications to luffy that do not quite stick and nami has never been one of my favorites as a love interest. Other than that, it's a great story, canonical personalities, good comedy, realistic dreams, and a good personality and charisma.

LV 2

Nicolas_Bahamondes

The story is good, there are some issues with the personalities, but other than that it's a great one piece story. things to look forward to: the first 31 chapters are all about luffy's training and how he learns the skills of the navy and the use of weapons

LV 4

Dinant

Yo why is it deleted and named 000x000???

LV 4

Chaoskinggodzilla

What happend to the book? Is it droped?........