Sundered works as well
Before I had time to comprehend my current state and circumstances an overbearing voice sundered into the room.
A New Life, Beyond Realms: Tensura x Overlord
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Map of Exandria:
Now I could ask for some leniency for myself, however, that would just make me feel worthless as the older sibling of most of them. I was supposed to be the one who stood up to bear the brunt of things and march forwards unabated... My masculine memories were making it quite difficult for me to even think of doing it. Either way, I had a way of speeding up the process and given that I could still caste 100 of them at any time; my worries were unfounded. If I made all of my clones do it every day for a year; a year on Exandria being 328 days, given no change in proficiency with blue essence, I would get 56,200 Shards repaired. From my estimates, and the amount of shards that I could sense, I approximately had 267,974 shards of my vision concept dangling in tatters amidst the remainder of my otherwise healthy soul. It would take me 4 years, 9 months, and 4 days for my soul to be completely healed, assuming that the process would not become more efficient over time.
A New Life, Beyond Realms: Tensura x Overlord
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The Raven Queen's Human Form:
Speaking of love... Lillia; The Raven Queen, had stopped by several times today as she was bonding very well with Milim and Shuna. Her attitude was much better than I anticipated with regards to my other partners. Jealousy had shone out a little with small interactions but for the majority of the time spent socialising they were cordial.
A New Life, Beyond Realms: Tensura x Overlord
Anime & Comics · Alex_Simmonds
I'm sorry, but you can't, Silviana is the only one able to harvest the blue essence like she is... And that's not due to her being a mage or anything, it's because she is a planewalker.
Thanks for the chapter! I don't know why the quality had dropped today, but I hope my comments allow for you to fix and edit if you wish to do so!
I made some small mistakes within the text above, please excuse them, I was trying to form my thoughts into words at a pace beyond what my fingers could support...
Ivan waved to the Kneazle, and the latter obediently flew towards the little master: "Show your new ability."
Hogwarts' White Lord
Book&Literature · HornyFBI
calling a pet by the species is a un-personal and suggests a disconnect between how he views her and she views him... Switching 'the Kneazle' to Yuumi would be much better and keep in theme with the majority of what you have written throughout the chapter.
Ivan waved to the Kneazle, and the latter obediently flew towards the little master: "Show your new ability."
Hogwarts' White Lord
Book&Literature · HornyFBI
This doesn't answer the previous question...?
"It's a bit simple."
Hogwarts' White Lord
Book&Literature · HornyFBI
Only a small thing here, and it is more of a punctuation thing... The sentence should be: Ivan really did help Yuumi transform, she regained her ancestral bloodline...
Ivan really helped Yuumi transform and gain her ancestral bloodline!
Hogwarts' White Lord
Book&Literature · HornyFBI
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Idk, you'll have to keep reading :)
A New Life, Beyond Realms: Tensura x Overlord
Anime & Comics · Alex_Simmonds