Webnovel Author: omeroford - Novel Collection

omeroford

7d

Commented

Is this first or third person?

I had some hints but I couldn't figure it out right now, so I focused back on the fight.

RISE OF THE FALLEN

Fantasy · Spandex_Playz

omeroford

13d

Commented

Why is the text here weird?

Suddenly, the Orc did something unexpected. It slammed its fist into the ground, and the earth rumbled with a deep tremor. The serpent, caught off guard, loosened its grip slightly.

Bloodforge

Fantasy · PlotTwistingPanda

omeroford

1mth

Commented

I like the novel a lot but author you gotta go back to clean some of this up. Good job by the way.

Mortal Realm Onefold 38.5/100.

Immortality: Raising an Ant Queen to Cultivate by increasing stat points

Eastern · Smoke Painted

omeroford

3mth

Posted

Excellent novel, thank you for your updates. I like the down to earth relatability of the protagonist. Will spiritual cultivation be introduced?

Of Arms and Arcane

Fantasy · Samofthepen

omeroford

5mth

Commented

Do you mean heterochromia?

Sooner than I realized I was at the age of five, the time drew closer. I finally started to see my features. I have blonde hair like my mom but it's shaped like my father's, while I have my father's eye color I have my mother's eyes. Am like a combination of both. Well, I should be cause am their kid.

Rise Of The Unremarkable Mage

Fantasy · Ilovepsicyahi

omeroford

6mth

Commented

Dude this is ridiculous.

In just a quarter of an hour, Lin Bai managed to scan through all the memories of Lin Xuanqing's entire life, crystal clear!

The Unparalleled Sword Emperor

Eastern · The Sole Sword Emperor

omeroford

6mth

Commented

Intimidating not intimating

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Red Scarf Mercenary

Action · Avid_Writer

omeroford

7mth

Commented

Cat not car

"Why do you ask? Could it be that you have a car or a fox? Actually, both are fine. I don't hate them."

Sharing Tamed Beasts' Talents for Eternal Life

Eastern · A Little Immortal

omeroford

7mth

Commented

How does he have access to the internet, that doesn’t make sense.

'Then, let's start with this one.' Choosing the potion that I wanted to go with, I ordered the ingredients on the internet. 'At least they are not that expensive.' I thought.

Hunter Academy: Revenge of the Weakest

Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer

omeroford

9mth

Commented

Story is moving really fast pace. Some explanation on the time skips.

ch 0 5 The Accident and the Final Test

The Lunar Samurai

Action · The_ALmighty2o

omeroford

1yr

Replied to omeroford

My bad I didn’ see you already did it.t

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BLAKE: DEMON SLAYER

Fantasy · Peterson_89

omeroford

1yr

Commented

Can you make an aux chapter with that info and other information through the story.

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BLAKE: DEMON SLAYER

Fantasy · Peterson_89

omeroford

1yr

Commented

Asher????

Suddenly, the sound of footsteps echoed through the store, and Asher whirled around, his heart in his throat. A ragged-looking man stood in the doorway, his eyes gleaming with a savage hunger.

Mystic Fisher of the Lost Waters

Fantasy · ExpiredRice

omeroford

1yr

Commented

Didn’t he say earlier that he picked a non-death match?

ch 41 First Match

Ascension To Magic Godhood

Fantasy · Ken_da_writer

omeroford

1yr

Commented

This made no sense. He needs a beast to complement Nova which would ideally be a defensive or control type. Why is the teacher helping him capture a beast?

ch 10 An Opportunity

The Primordial Tamer

Fantasy · HaozDancer

omeroford

1yr

Commented

Do you have artwork or an image you have of the characters, if so can you put it on like an extra page so we can go back and look at it. I forgot how Issac and Warren look. Nice work on the novel.

"SAMUEL?!"

Beasts: Reborn

Fantasy · _Avatar0FFury_

omeroford

1yr

Commented

Author that doesn’t make sense. It would be better to say that because of the experience he gained so far he got better at dodging.

Lu Yuan heaved a sigh of relief. Luckily, he had practiced a movement art.

My Genes Can Evolve Limitlessly

Eastern · Blue Sky Washing Rain

omeroford

1yr

Commented

What question, that dialogue is missing.

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SpaceMage

Fantasy · BishopsNemesis

omeroford

1yr

Commented

What? This entire chapter needs to be refined. I love the story and appreciate the chapter but this is dfficult to understand at times.

　　 Lu Ye changed his mind and realized that the other party was afraid that he was mistaken for him. The hand on the handle of the knife was loosened, and he said lightly: "I was killed."