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Snakes, Systems, and succubi; what else would someone want in a novel? It does a good job following the rules of the contest, and I admit I got hooked more at the ‘snake’ part then anything else. Overall a very unique take on a overdone genre, definitely adding to my collection :)

An interesting take on the vampire genre, its worth a read if you’re interested in fantasy novels! I look forward to reading more as the story develops :)

Thanks for your kind words haha, if I'm already good enough to be like an anime, that must mean I'm doing better than I thought :)! I’ll have to check it out at some point, I’ve heard the name but never saw it.

Yeah, I didn't like the stuttering either haha! Luckily It stops a bit after she’s introduced.

Wow, This story is amazing! I loved the first chapter, The fight scene and the cut to it being a commercial was a clever hook! Rpg-based novels are one of my favorite genres, so I’ll be reading this for the long run!

Just from the first chapter alone, you can tel you’re in for a ride! The opening description is amazing, and immediately hooks me in :) Definitely adding to my collections, and i’ll be watching for new chapters!

Awesome story! While the first chapter is a bit exposition-heavy, the rest makes up tons for it! With a unique concept idea, its definitely a worthwhile read, and I look forward to reading more :)

Haha thanks! Don’t worry, I won’t drop it until I after win the contest :)