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Feed on the different vampire blood groups to swap powers.
Warning: Do not drink human blood, strength level will fluctuate.
[Powerful blood group: O negative | Chaos elrment | nearly extinct]
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Zaiden Rivers is determined to restore the health of his father who has some strange disease. While his mother is missing, Zaiden's actual lineage is unknown.
At the age of thirteen he's already a criminal genius. Rumored to be responsible for the killing spree, his targets are vampires. The possible cure around is the heirloom of some royal vampire family.
The tables turn when he's killed along with his butler. And both are summoned as Demon host and Ghost partner, along with a guiding system.
Will he be able to live up to the progenitor's blessing? Or the so-called cure isn't just the sole stimulus of his madness! .
干呕看帅哥了解自己
[Not heavily system novel, rather a tech-magic blend.]
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เขียนรีวิวGreat hook at the start with immediate action. The pace is definitely top notch, I enjoyed reading the novel very much. MC's motivation is clear and I love the butler!
Decent writing and story concept. Though I would've preferred it to be a tad more descriptive. Overall, it's good. I don't notice any grammatical errors. And the story's pretty good.
An interesting take on the vampire genre, its worth a read if you’re interested in fantasy novels! I look forward to reading more as the story develops :)
This is my first time reading a vampire theme novel and as of writing this review, I'm only 10 chapters in. Firstly, in terms of story pacing, it is just about right I guess. Not too 'draggy' or short either. As for grammar usage, I personally don't find it confusing and could understand the story in general. Couldn't comment much on that topic as I am not an expert in it myself. However, I find the lack of description makes it a little disorienting at times. Secondly, although the action is present in every chapter, the necessary elements of world-building can't seem to catch up and I was thus left with dialogues after dialogues without being able to imagine the proper scenes that are taking place. Nevertheless, I can say that consistency in story telling is there and by inserting the atmosphere and environment properly into those scenes, it would make it more easier for readers to imagine and immerse themselves in the story. Good luck fellow author!
😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱 LOVED THE VAMPIRES LOVED SO MANY POWERS BLOOD GROUPS????? SO FRIGGIN COOL IDEA HOPE NO HA-REM 😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱😱
I don't read much of a vampire kind of story or so. Only one I have read was my vampire system and now counting this becomes 2. Well, I cannot say anything about grammar or so because I am not so good at grammar myself but it was good for me to read at least.
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The first chapter is amazing, I was hooked from the start. I love vampires and everything related to them. My name is darkDEMISE so I obviously love the dark genre. I hope you can continue writing this novel. Best of luck for success