Webnovel Author: drewcifer82 - Fanfic Collection

Read it in bursts and interrupt it with something light hearted and easy. It’s well done, but a bit heavy in my opinion, hence the advice. I’ve been reading it since the beginning, I haven’t caught up all the way yet because I’m taking my own advice. I just got to around chapter 155. I just can’t binge read it for longer than a few days before needing to read something stupid where the MC is OP and everything goes their way. 🤷🏽 what can ya do. Like I said though, this story is really well done. It just needs to be read in short bursts.

This is my first five star review in recent memory. I’ve followed it from the start and had read the author’s previous work as well. And while I enjoyed the other one, this one has seemed to work its way into first place for me. It really captures the essence of Fairy Tail, the goofy campy stuff, the guild’s sense of family, and throws in some fun surprises along the way. The two OC’s are perfectly blended in without being obtrusive yet also change canon in logical ways in response to their presence. The harem isn’t forced, there’s real believable build up to each new member, and the lemons aren’t in your face and thrown in haphazardly without regard to the overarching plot. They’re also clearly marked so readers who want to skip, can. Just pay attention to the author notes for those instances where the lemon is further down and there’s still plot relevant writing at the beginning. The only complaint I could possibly see is how long it takes to reach canon episode/chapter 1. But honestly how it was done makes way too much sense for the complaint to be at all valid. So, suck it up, read it, and enjoy it. All in all, very well done and I can’t wait to keep reading. Thanks!

Of course it’s their choice. “Here’s a key to everything you could ever dream of for your planet and loved ones, buuut in order to get all the bells and whistles you have to join my harem. But yea, it’s totally your choice and I’m not a complete scumbag for dangling what amounts to salvation in front of you in exchange for your body.” There are so many better written plot lines that make much more sense that answer the question “why a harem?” out there you could have drawn inspiration from. Hell, you wrote better reasons to be a part of a harem before, Ein. This is basically sugarcoated coercion mixed with prostitution.

Relationships are forced. Partners are put into a catch 22 situation where they either get awesome stuff if they agree to be in the harem or they lose out on it if they don’t and it’s not about their feelings at all. The feelings that do sprout are due to basically Stockholm syndrome. It REALLY started off strong. Super strong. So much wasted potential.