Nope I have been reading novel since 2016 and i genuinely know how story goes up and it one of major plot holes that can never been eliminated nicely one could do anything such as why transmigration any other secret or anything but you need to know if people known there is a alien soul in loved one body there family members will eliminate him at any cost that is human nature as as we human tend to have very protective nature towards the things we have even we like it or not. Also because me having read so many novels have also put me view of your novel others can disagree but i genuinely thought you were going good until u did this it just give a bad taste to me and believe me i never forget the plot holes left by authors so just this gonna bug me whenever he gonna talk with his sister and i generally don't comment in novels but i commented here u need to know I genuinely regretted plot hole in this novel u can say this subjective but u can think various scenario where the things will never go as u planned.... Well keep writing keep up urs good work
That's why I thought I should tell her about me, not Zero Blanks. Our relationship won't be of normal brother and sister after this, that I know, but it's better than her thinking of me as a complete stranger.
Fantasy · moon_senpai
it ruined already... Nothing can save this story even the following plots are good
That's why I thought I should tell her about me, not Zero Blanks. Our relationship won't be of normal brother and sister after this, that I know, but it's better than her thinking of me as a complete stranger.
Fantasy · moon_senpai
He is stupid for sure
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Fantasy · Magecrafter
thanks for chapter
"Welcome to the Original Castle," said the figure.
Fantasy · Devilsmercy026
thanks for chapter
Thinking of this Will put a terrifying smile on his face.
Fantasy · Devilsmercy026
thanks for chapter
thanks for chapters
Of course, before leaving, I search for anything to find on the King's body, but to my disappointment, I find nothing of use, except for the large club that was broken in two but I just took it with me to see what is made of and then I passed the portal.
Fantasy · Devilsmercy026
thanks for chapter
ch 26 Chapter 26, Large Maze?
Fantasy · Devilsmercy026
Thanks for the chapter
ch 19 Chapter 19, Sanguimancer Class
Fantasy · Devilsmercy026
Nope NTR are not that much irritating .. once you read a shit tons of novels and have experience of them for 8-10 years u will know the fucking annoying are authors .. .they fucking degrade the initial good novels or good idea .. refuse to admit their work is trash .. . what irks me more that they make the story repeatative as novels they read and refuse to add more elements to it. .. time passes and they initially forgets from which freaking point of view they wrote the novel and goes as same scenarios like face slapping, thinking with dick, getting annoyed at any fucking small reasons and there are many .. .well just my opinion don't take me as a bully or I would have shitted on too many in webnovel. .. also I like the way the novel is going .. .i would like to say a good and solid start
The kind of author who thinks their work is a masterpiece when in reality, a nine-year-old could write a better story than them!
Fantasy · Night_Crawler619
Bye ..enough of this trash
Surely someone as kind as her wouldn't scorn him for being mana-less.
Fantasy · Sleepy_Slime
Pay attention here the curse has already been cured
[Foreign aid detected the curse is cured]
Fantasy · Lucifer_Mors
Are u a fucking Chinese author who goes with such bad move or only urs lower body works?? idiot
"I give you one week to put it all in my hands."
Fantasy · Devil_Paragon
well **** her Thier is no teacher in your harem
"… That is a good idea."
Fantasy · Aidka
i think it should be a immortal animal
Teacher, I also think I'm an animal.
Fantasy · Aidka
You have choosen death itself my friend
"After years of search, I finally managed to find a scapegoat."
Protagonist?Antagonist? I Reject Both
Fantasy · Lonelythree