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Fate.

A rather vague concept for mortals and weak beings.

Even the strong might not be able to escape the clutches of fate.

Will, a supreme being of the Universe thought that his life was pretty much the same as other experts in the Universe.

He thought that he was just destined to chill and play around as he suffered nearly all his life to rise to the top but Fate was a very strange concept.

Will who thought that he is above the laws of fate and density found himself get dragged by it again in the Chaos that unfolded due to gaining knowledge that wasn’t supposed to be known by him early in time.

And before he knew it, the disciples he chose to teach after waking up from his slumber of millions of years, ended having him dragged by fate to play into its hands
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People thought that the end have started.

Many different races thought that by the beginning of the chaos, many would end up losing a lot of their loved ones.

At the same time, times of Chaos are also known as times of great Opportunities.

Dangers and opportunities.

When the incoming Chaos came, many people had this thought.
But, they didn’t know that this was simply a prelude to just a bigger chaos.

They live in a Universe that they thought that it is just like the many out there.

A Universe, that the people outside have thought that it had been lost in the long river of History.

Follow my journey as the destined among the inhabitants of the once-forgotten Universe rises again to power due to the sudden invasion from the Outside Realm.

Watch the rise of Noah and Max.

Two beings who managed to drag a Supreme Being like Will into the unfolding Chaos.
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I can’t promise that the first few chapters are enjoyable since I am a newbie author, but I am pretty sure that I am always evolving as I am trying to make my plot and storyline more perfect and more interesting.

This Novel isn’t a slow-paced one but it isn’t fast-paced, the story is moving in moderation as many things are bound to unfold at the same time in different places.

I don’t know if I am really delivering a story as I imagined in my head but I am doing my best as I am constantly improving and I hope that your reviews and comments can help me do a better job.

I am always open to suggestions from readers. If you have any ideas that might go well with my story, you can just contact me on Discord or leave me a comment.
I hope you have a good read.


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    Since I have released 100 chapters already, I decided to drop a few words for my past and future readers. I am not very good with words when talking to people. So, I will just be blunt with my words. My novel is not the best, as it has mistakes, but I am sure that along the way I fixed many of them and managed to improve my writing quality to give a better experience to my readers. My first few chapters may not be the best out there, but I can do nothing about it as I just have to start somewhere. I can't just start by throwing you into a vortex of events when I haven't even started introducing anyone or anything. So, that is what I did in my first chapters. Now that I have reached Volume 3, my story's framework is almost done as the real events of my story are going to start occurring. All I can say, to not spoil my story, is that it will be a Unique ride with many mysteries and discoveries that will certainly interest you if you are a lover of Unique energies, bloodlines, evolutions, Unique species, and much more. Well, that's all for now. I hope you just give it a try and tell me your opinions as I am open to discussions and suggestions from my readers. Maybe some of your suggestions could help me in making my story better. I hope my Novel gives my readers a good experience while reading it. So, Enjoy!

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    Till now a solid start .. keep up the good work [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

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    AimanFaroqq

    Is this harem? If so is it going to be big harem or na

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    Jeri_
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    I thoroughly enjoyed reading this unique and intriguing story with its interesting plotline. Although the story is told from a mixed point of view, the author skillfully guides the reader through the transitions and clearly identifies who is speaking. The characters were relatable, and I found myself invested in their journeys. I also appreciate that the story was easy to read and had very few mistakes, which made for a seamless reading experience. Overall, I highly recommend this engaging and relatable story to anyone looking for an enjoyable read. 🫡

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    Jacob_E
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    After 55 chapter I can say the novel is above average. The story doesnt seen too serious, based on the writing style, casual read. The only true downside is that the story is written almost entirely in present tense, even when the narrator is talking which isn't the norm and kinda a turn off from someone that knows english as a first language. Overall still pretty good.

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    Chapter 137: Chapter 137, Back to Earth 1 years ago

    จำนวน 0 : Auxiliary Volume

    1. ++SHORT NOTICE++ 1 years ago

    จำนวน 1 : The Beginning

    1. 1
      Chapter 1, Prologue 1 years ago
    2. 2
      Chapter 2, Awakening 1 years ago
    3. 3
      Chapter 3, Awakening 2 1 years ago
    4. 4
      Chapter 4, Ava 1 years ago
    5. 5
      Chapter 5, Chatching up 1 years ago
    6. 6
      Chapter 6, School? 1 years ago
    7. 7
      Chapter 7, Name 1 years ago
    8. 8
      Chapter 8, A Little bit of Info 1 years ago
    9. 9
      Chapter 9, Maxwell Ashrend 1 years ago
    10. 10
      Chapter 10, Universal Fortune and Luck 1 years ago
    11. 11
      Chapter 11, Gods' Meeting 1 years ago
    12. 12
      Chapter 12, A Small Heist 1 years ago
    13. 13
      Chapter 13, Second Disciple 1 years ago
    14. 14
      Chapter 14, The Vampire Realm 1 years ago
    15. 15
      Chapter 15, The First System 1 years ago
    16. 16
      Chapter 16, A Lot Of Questions 1 years ago
    17. 17
      Chapter 17, Explanation 1 years ago
    18. 18
      Chapter 18, Class Choices 1 years ago
    19. 19
      Chapter 19, Sanguimancer Class 1 years ago
    20. 20
      Chapter 20, New Skills 1 years ago
    21. 21
      Chapter 21, Time To Work 1 years ago
    22. 22
      Chapter 22, Free Of Worries 1 years ago
    23. 23
      Chapter 23, First Time (First part)(R-18) 1 years ago
    24. 24
      Chapter 24, First Time(Second part)(R-18) 1 years ago
    25. 25
      Chapter 25, Visit Hell? 1 years ago
    26. 26
      Chapter 26, Large Maze? 1 years ago
    27. 27
      Chapter 27, First Floor 1 years ago
    28. 28
      Chapter 28, Red Goblins 1 years ago
    29. 29
      Chapter 29, A Little Development 1 years ago
    30. 30
      Chapter 30, Red Goblin King 1 years ago
    31. 31
      Chapter 31, Going Home 1 years ago
    32. 32
      Chapter 32, A Savior? 1 years ago
    33. 33
      Chapter 33, Guests 1 years ago
    34. 34
      Chapter 34, A small meeting 1 years ago
    35. 35
      Chapter 35, Dungeon Rewards 1 years ago
    36. 36
      Chapter 36, New Unique Skill? 1 years ago
    37. 37
      Chapter 37, A Little Sealing Artifact 1 years ago
    38. 38
      Chapter 38, A little twist in fate 1 years ago
    39. 39
      Chapter 39, A Little Mana Lesson 1 years ago
    40. 40
      Chapter 40, Small Requirements 1 years ago
    41. 41
      Chapter 41, History 1 years ago
    42. 42
      Chapter 42, Discussion 1 years ago
    43. 43
      Chapter 43, Max's Fate 1 years ago
    44. 44
      Chapter 44, Change of destination 1 years ago
    45. 45
      Chapter 45, A little Shock 1 years ago
    46. 46
      Chapter 46, Limbo 1 years ago
    47. 47
      Chapter 47, Visiting an old friend 1 years ago
    48. 48
      Chapter 48, A Little Warm Up 1 years ago
    49. 49
      Chapter 49, Limbo 2 1 years ago
    50. 50
      Chapter 50, Evolution requirments 1 years ago
    51. 51
      Chapter 51, An Old Castle 1 years ago
    52. 52
      Chapter 52, The Original Castle 1 years ago
    53. 53
      Chapter 53, First Test 1 years ago
    54. 54
      Chapter 54, Heart of Desires 1 years ago
    55. 55
      Chapter 55, Heart of Desires 2 1 years ago
    56. 56
      Chapter 56, Way Home 1 years ago
    57. 57
      Chapter 57, Fight 1 1 years ago
    58. 58
      Chapter 58, Fight 2 1 years ago
    59. 59
      Chapter 59, Outer Realm 1 years ago
    60. 60
      Chapter 60, A favor 1 years ago
    61. 61
      Chapter 61, Inheritance 1 1 years ago
    62. 62
      Chapter 62, Inheritance 2 1 years ago
    63. 63
      Chapter 63, Demonic Altar 1 years ago
    64. 64
      Chapter 64, Demonic Altar 2 1 years ago
    65. 65
      Chapter 65, Home 1 years ago

    จำนวน 3 : Cosmic Siege

    1. 97
      Chapter 97, Annoyance 1 years ago
    2. 98
      Chapter 98, Prelude To A Bigger Chaos 1 years ago
    3. 99
      Chapter 99, The Devil Race 1 years ago
    4. 100
      Chapter 100, Blood-feeding egg 1 years ago
    5. 101
      Chapter 101, Unknown Chains 1 years ago
    6. 102
      Chapter 102, Differences 1 years ago
    7. 103
      Chapter 103, Future Test 1 years ago
    8. 104
      Chapter 104, Jumping off a Cliff 1 years ago
    9. 105
      Chapter 105, Requriments to breakthrough 1 years ago
    10. 106
      Chapter 106. Different Levels 1 years ago
    11. 107
      Chapter 107, Purple Energy 1 years ago
    12. 108
      Chapter 108, Surrounded 1 years ago
    13. 109
      Chapter 109, A Fight 1 years ago
    14. 110
      Chapter 110, Black Katana 1 years ago
    15. 111
      Chapter 111, Seems Familiar 1 years ago
    16. 112
      Chapter 112, Too Weak 1 years ago
    17. 113
      Chapter 113, Pain 1 years ago
    18. 114
      Chapter 114, Ancient Family 1 years ago
    19. 115
      Chapter 115, Little Black 1 years ago
    20. 116
      Chapter 116, Moving Forward 1 years ago
    21. 117
      Chapter 117, Enslaving Dimensional Masters 1 years ago
    22. 118
      Chapter 118, Confused 1 years ago
    23. 119
      Chapter 119, Meeting 1 years ago
    24. 120
      Chapter 120, 'CUTE' 1 years ago
    25. 121
      Chapter 121, An Airhead 1 years ago
    26. 122
      Chapter 122, Emotions 1 years ago
    27. 123
      Chapter 123, 'We are staying here' 1 years ago
    28. 124
      Chapter 124, A companion 1 years ago
    29. 125
      Chapter 125, Abandoned 1 years ago
    30. 126
      Chapter 126, A Demoness 1 years ago
    31. 127
      Chapter 127, Special Tree 1 years ago
    32. 128
      Chapter 128, Icecore Fruit 1 years ago
    33. 129
      Chapter 129, An imitation 1 years ago
    34. 130
      Chapter 130, Small Problems 1 years ago
    35. 131
      Chapter 131, Rebirth of the 'Twins' 1 years ago
    36. 132
      Chapter 132, An Interesting Show 1 1 years ago
    37. 133
      Chapter 133, An Interesting Show 2 1 years ago
    38. 134
      Chapter 134, Situation on Earth 1 years ago
    39. 135
      Chapter 135, Movements 1 years ago
    40. 136
      Chapter 136, Permanent Death 1 years ago
    41. 137
      Chapter 137, Back to Earth 1 years ago

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