If I remember correctly there was none when the Imperium came to be either. So a former space marine asking this shit is quite off.
"Of course it's true. Are you saying there's no sea left on Terra?"
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What you might want to say is that the star systems are too far away that the light of the astronomicon doesn’t reach it. Or something along those lines.
Kayvaan's eyes widened. "Are you saying these galaxies are so far away that even the Immaterium doesn't reach them?"
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That makes zero sense. The immaterium is everywhere.
Kayvaan's eyes widened. "Are you saying these galaxies are so far away that even the Immaterium doesn't reach them?"
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Author, galaxies and star systems are entirely different things.
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Three galaxies?? You mean star systems?
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The story premise is good. Execution needs work. Chapters need serious combing through to fix mistakes. Mistakes like calling the Adeptus Custodes , the imperial guard. Or calling space marine chapters , star marine corps. This might also just be a translation for all we know.
Please stop saying marine corps instead of marine chapter
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*Custodes
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Imperial Guards? You mean custodians? Both are entirely different branches.
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Space marine chapter
"We're not here for a sightseeing trip," Darius replied calmly. "Master Kayvaan and I are here to handle the formalities for creating the Space Marine Corps."
Warhammer 40k : Space Marine Kayvaan
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