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What happens when you suddenly get dropped into a galaxy far far away. You have a few god given gifts , how will you use them.
AN: This is my first time writing. I hope this goes well. I am just writing as hobby . sorry in advance ,if the updates are irregular in the future, but i will try my utmost to keep this going. All constructive criticisms are welcome. I don't know all the lore, so I have to do a lot of digging around to find them. And this story will most certainly deviate from canon a little bit, the MC existing itself is a deviation in the flow of canon.
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Disclaimer : I don't own the Cover Image. Pillaged that of google. All writes of Star Wars belong to Disney or any other Mega corporations that might buy Disney in the future . I only lay claim to the original characters that pop up all over because I am a lazy ass who thinks making shit up is better than finding canon names and the story arc I introduce( well sometimes).
Warning: The first ten chapters are a bit tough to read. It took me that long to realise that spacing in Microsoft Word and Web-novel are different. Will edit it in the future.
With that out of the way, ENJOY!
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Thanks for the good work ! 😁👍🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟🌟
Amazing keep up the great work! Looking forward to more chapters 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I do not recommend this fic, premise sounds good he got 5 wishes and he choose not too bad ones, but the author nerfed them and him quite badly. For example he wanted to be a wound in the force and in definition to become one needs to be force sensitive but he isn't, secondly he was supposed to get assassin from assassin's creed abilities but he got pretty much nothing from there so that wish is wasted. Author can't do the pretty much most important thing for a writer that is consistency he just does shit out of his ass because he said so and I can't stand that. Do not read the fic it's disappointment.
An amazingly detailed story, with an interesting premise that leads to what I think is one of the best fanfictions. The MC is clever and meticulous in his plans which leads to a very strong MC, but one who hasn't relied on plot armour. This is perfect for anyone who is a Star Wars nerd, or even people that are trying to get into it, like me, although to get the most out of it i end up watching the clone wars episodes corresponding to the chapter I'm reading. 10/10
great star wars ff hope author keeps up the good work ...........................................................................................................................................
An interesting and original story about a wound in the force. Ending becoming a mandalorian (and a badass one) we can follow our Mc after the Civil War on mandalor who plan to make himself a place in the middle of the galaxy without the temptation of the force. So far an exciting and very interesting story with consistent chapter around 20 page average by chapter (which is very fulfilling per update). An excellent quality of writing (even though some misstyping there and there but not ruining anything) you can hop in without worries 👍❤️
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quality: few mistakes other than that good but could use some rythm to get reading flow better. plot: corny, crinchy and not good needs lot of work ....more foreshadowing then actual plot. character: not relatable and bit egoistic with lots of contradicting attitude as well as skill that are OP gets nerf on this MC. update: update stability for webnovel it is fine in efficiency. world background: lots of guesses done that has gotten the world view bit messed up but overall good... **: should edit some of MC's attitude toward manipulation, as he doesn't like it but only to get drunk (as he could with wolverine healing factor and high adabelity) doesn't really show his motive. And small stuffs like this doesn't help in fleshing out the MC, instead ruins the whole chirade.
One of the best star wars and mandalorian fanfic i have had the pleasure to read. Keep up the good work. ............................................................................................................................................
The series so far is wonderful to read I myself would not have been so forthright with ancient tech , but beyond that I cant wait for the next few chapters .
If you like star was. i would definitely give this fanfic a try. so far its been a pleasure to read, so much so i ended up binging the entire thing into late in the night, so kudos to you author. also beware of some spoilers but i would like to give some opinion on what i think is good and what i think is bad, and potential changes if the author want to bother. Writing quality is good, while not perfect, it is leagues ahead of the average fanfic. so good job here Updates arent super fast. but makes up for it with usually quite long and good chapters. no chapters really strike me as "filler" chapters where nothing really happens. so good job here aswell Story not exactly super unique. it follows a story which most of us a probably familiar with, making it easy to follow along. my current biggest gripe is the very glossed over star forge. this structure is very unique and very dangerous. (a bit of random star wars trivia for those interested.) --the star forge was made by "the builders" which by design is rather cruel and savage. since the star forge uses the force, it slowly inherited these traits and became a super powerful dark force artifact. which will corrupt any creature that is close for an extended period of time. -- mixed bag but still good characters i liked it a bit better earlier where we had some comic relief? with his squad and cousin talking and drinking. i would like that to show up a bit more from time to time. the only really developed character is the mc. the author can kinda get away with this. since we know pretty much everyone mentioned so far, because of the the films. to this im pretty neutral. world. star wars world. a classic and very expansive plenty of interesting things to take from. i enjoy kingdom building very much. so the early chapters spent on building up his first planet was quite enjoyable. generally i would still call this pretty good. some general thoughts. the fanfic is solid. however as a general theme. the novel goes very fast. i really want a bit more detail on some things, which could help fill out a bit where there is "time skip" this fanfic is also very comparable to the legendary mechanic, so if you like that novel, you will feel right at home here. i enjoy the mcs almost omnipotent way of handling himself, keeping both the sith and jedi on their toes a few other notes. the ships ive seen some people complain that they make no sense if you arent really into star wars trivia, im inclined to agree so my suggestion would be to use more broad and general terms fx. "type-dreadnaught heavily armed and armored with a massive 600000tonnes displacement" or something similar goodluck with your fanfic, i will continue reading
I found the story boring. The whole 8 chapters were cancer to my eyes to read. Bad structure and blobs of text. Moreover, what is even the plot? From what I understand mc is building a secret base but to what end? Stop Palpatine? Create an empire? I don't know! SEEMS boring. Plus what up with the whole 'Daenerys Targaryen' anti-slavery fighting thing. Isn't he a Mandalorian warrior? Why should he care about slavery in the galaxy or whatnot? From what I've seen mc was responsible directly or indirectly for the deaths of innocents so why does he somehow grow morals?
Of all the Star Wars fanfic I have read, this is by far the best.............................................................................................................
Of all the starwars stories I've read over the years this is the most satisfying. I'm enjoying the mandalorian story line instead of an average force user Jedi/sith or grey Jedi. This is very enjoyable to read and I will say you've done wonders please keep it up.
This is a very built and researched story. The details regarding events, characters, technology and cultures are great. The MC is determined and cunning, knowing what to use in order to gain the upper hand and using his knowledge of the star wars universe in order to actually help a lot of people even if it also gives himself benifits. The Mando stuff is really well utilized as well and i am excited to see how things will unfold. The only complaint i could have is the updates, but i know it is difficult to write continuously and the author doesn’t actually owe us any of this. I enjoy reading this Fanfic and hope the author can continue working on it whenver he/she can or is willing.
This is a great story. This is one of the best star wars stories I have ever read, and is also one of the only ones where the main character isn't force sensitive. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😦😋😋😋😋😋
Love this story best Star Wars story I’ve read keep up the grwat work👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👇👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Amazing Fan-Fic so far, I’ve loved how you introduced The Mandolorian’s and the progression of the story has been a wonder. Keep up the good work 👍😇!
This story is developing extremely well and it is probably among the top 3 stories I've ever read I mean this story always gets my votes that alone should prove how much I like it
Of all the Star Wars Fan-Fictions I have read(some 15), this is by far the best. The story is unique and just keeps giving. Most of the Star Wars Fics follow the same premise, but this one did something totally new and it turned out perfectly.