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"What's with this kid's intense stare? Does he think I'm some kind of… p.diddy's victim?" Gin thought nervously.
Naruto: Uchiha Madara's Cousin
Anime & Comics · Rashta
"Are you two done yet? Or are you just here to pad the word count?"
Naruto: Uchiha Madara's Cousin
Anime & Comics · Rashta
yet..
Fortunately, John was not a child and didn't dislike Hermione.
Hogwarts' John Wick
Book&Literature · Dragonel23
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The first chapter establishes the character as an almost 70 years old man from the future. The author states the story is about business, then has the MC make a bunch of stupid business choices like giving out 66% of his shares to people he's not really friends with but is crushing on because MCU. The Grammer is alright, seems like plenty of chapters (97), but having a MC who died at 69 and came back in a college students body, acting like an idiot isn't fun to read. I'd pass on this one.
It desperately needs an editor. The English is broken and most of the sentences don't make sense. Wrong words are used repeatedly. I made it to chapter 2, it might get better as it goes but I can't keep struggling through.
TFTC!
McGonagall was giving them dirty looks, like she knew they had been up to something, but couldn't pin anything on them. She kept a very close eye on the amnesiac, hoping that his memories would come back, and perhaps his manners with them. She missed the polite Harry.
New And Improved Harry Potter
Book&Literature · Earthly_Writer