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Marvel in Between Flesh and Steel.

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In an surprising turn of events, Alex wakes up in the Marvel Universe(AU), problem is he had limited knowledge about Marvel. He only know some of the well known heroes, villains and lurking dimensional gods. He did his best to adjusts to this new reality, though not a genius like Ironman, he decides to adapt to this reality by starting a tech company he called Arasaka, hoping to strike it rich.

During his undertaking, Alex finally gotten his wish, a half arse Golden Finger. That gave him advanced knowledge about technology, including cyberware, futuristic vehicles and weapons from games and movies like Skynet from Terminator. Empowered with this newfound knowledge, he transforms into a tech-enhanced superhero Navigating the challenges of the Marvel Universe.

Authors Note:
The Technology he will mostly use are from Terminator, Predator, Cyberpunk. I’ll add more as the story goes.
There will be no Harem.
I’ll try not to write romances as well so no Smut.
I’ll have the main character focus in technology, sorry no magic. MC will appear as he has limited knowledge about the marvel verse.
MC only knows about MCU, Spider-man Cartoons and Movies. A few clips he have watched from his previous life like Dare Devil.

FAQ:
1) Is this business focus: No its not, There will be parts but not much.
2) There is a chance for romance depends on how the story goes.

Note:
I don’t know how to write stories. Believe me I tried.
I’m just glad that I am able to accomplish one of my bucket list with the help of ChatGPT.
Please be gentle lol. I know its gonna be bad, as again I don't know how to write in English and its not my native language. Its not even my secondary language, its not even the third since we have lots of languages, where I’m from.

Any helpful criticism will be greatly appreciated.
I'm just doing this for fun and hopefully when I actually try to write another story, it will be better.

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Indra_lord

When I see the name of the novel. From the moment I understood the weakness of my flesh, it disgusted me. I craved to the strength and certainty of steel. I aspired to the purity of the blessed machine. Your kind cling to your flesh as if it will not decay and fail you. One day the crude biomass that you called a temple will wither and you'll beg my kind to save you. But I am already saved. For the machine is immortal. Even in death i serve the Omnissiah.

10mth
ดู 12 การตอบกลับ
Iseeyou
LV 15 Badge

I like the novel and idea but I’m really getting beyond sick of people using chat gpt. It’s so robotic and dry and makes the novel feel so fake it’s hard to describe but it makes the story feel so dry.

10mth
ดู 7 การตอบกลับ
tt_g
LV 4 Badge

It’s a decent story but the writing quality is really bad. Every once in a while the author uses the script-dialogue thing where there’s the character’s name followed by colons. I always hate those and I understand using it for writing interviews and stuff but even then the author wrote like the most generic responses and interview questions ever. I think the author stopped doing the script-dialogue thing in later chapters since I don’t see them anymore but now they have a new problem. They really like starting off paragraphs with a character’s name and comma as an introductory modifier, which isn’t a problem, but they do it for several paragraphs in a row so it actually looks like they’re writing from a template. Creative writing is supposed to be creative, and writing like that gets boring real fast.

10mth
ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
Athan1098

No harem or romance, you’re already my favorite author.

9mth
ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
Gh0st00
LV 15 Badge

I haven't read it yet but what kind of story is good if it doesn't even have a little romance in it if all it will pertain to is mostly technology sounds like a somebody ain't never had any relationships don't know how to write a romance and it ain't got to be all about it but I would like him to have some kind of partner you know like Natasha or something

10mth
ดู 23 การตอบกลับ
warmonger0007

this is boring and dry ,Chatgpt made it boring and dry,author edit your Chatgpt story to make it seem natural at least

8mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Bogdan7

just another AI generated story.........

8mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Elyk_Graham

Love the idea of the story but it feel more like a bunch of recaps on what the mic did than an actual story

9mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Lizrock

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10mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Darth_Ullyses

this is good.. (if this is translated then the translator did a good job)Keep us the excellent work 👏 👏 👏 👏

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10mth
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
MagnusAugust

This has all the elements of Chinese in it. Weakening of Mc for plot, the experiences of past life are left in the past itself, stupid MC but somehow regarded as genius in the novel, mysterious MC, Chinese cultivation bs. This is just till the chapters that I have read.

7mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Concor_Corcoran

To be honest the plot is simply a general version of most other stories. The Golden Finger doesnt really make sense and for being powerful super cliche. Also from reading to the latest chapters, the story seems to be partly written with some type of AI software and seemingly partly edited.

9mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Niloy_Das

Another MC who just uses mind raping slavery to solve problems, and he doesn't just do it to villains or enemies. It's mostly normal people he is doing it to. An AI which hides things from him and just gives his tech to others and he is fine with it. 🙄 Oh, and the chapters are written by Chat-GPT. So the writing is very awkward.

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7mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Ireallylikereading

well unlike what you think there are actually very good novels without any romance, also i came to this novel Because it doesnt focus on that "bro cant i just read for the story and not the smut".

8mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Daoist521575

Why is there so many "QUADRA TYPE 66 JAVELINA" refferences!!!!!

8mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
secret_1_reader

need few editing and some rewriting else the story is all good. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .

9mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Project_Traveler

5 ⭐ ...take it slow and don't rush it..you are doing great work..

10mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Zed1_Eren_

It's too bad. Here author explains nothing not even why mc started to fight and mainly this fic writing style is too bland. ohh and here mc thinks that Punisher is an OP character as he is Anti-hero😅. mc thinks that only someone who can easily destroy planets can be a Anti Hero 😂. Mc is a pu**y

2mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
definitely_human

a RAAAAAAHHH !!!!! FOR THE MACHINE GOD RAAAAAAHHHH !!!!

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2mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ

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