The plot is very good with a new feeling for pokemon, it is not just data and numbers that will define the strenght of a pokemon but several reason like technique and skill. MC is strong but reasonably strong, you can see his growth and it is not like a power up because i did a push up. Great poke fanfic, worth reading just sometimes confusing because of the name. If someone has the raw name, I will gladly take it.
Technically they are allies but the gap is between a superior and an employee. Even worse sometimes when you know that a general needs to be dispatched to protect a dragon man. If he become a navy what will happen ? 24/24 7/7 with the admiral ?
Kizaru made this suggestion from the bottom of his heart. The navy and Celestial Dragons are allies in a sense. Lakeman's choice to become a navy can be said to be a matter of course.
One Piece : Start As Celestial Dragon And Take Down Hancock
Anime & Comics · Uchicha_Remant
Technically it is obito sharingan 🥸
[Ding, congratulations to the host for obtaining the Mangekyō Sharingan (Hatake Kakashi)]
Teaching In Two Dimensional With Koro-sensei Template
Anime & Comics · Uchiha_Itachi007
Sunshine is overrated, in 1v1 against rinnegan. 6 path, will win. 6 path is strong because of rinnengan and its versability, with various power like space, element, life, death, summoning. Just need to send Mc in another dimension and wait for his death and its done.
As for Asahi, the Grace, Sunshine in his body has completely exploded, and he can already destroyed the whole world without mastering it. He can easily make Sage of Six Paths kneel in front of him right now, let alone when he mastered this power. Moreover, afer he fully mastered this power, he can also obtain other powers.
Naruto: Our Goal Is To Dig Every Corner of Konoha
Anime & Comics · Iampoorguy
I think author you need to have a clear path for your worldview, currently it is a mix between dark world Pokémon (poacher, death etc..) and childish world with Ash like the anime, which lead sometimes to confusing choice by the MC, like the gang who tried to wreck the gym, kill MC and getting no punishment. I think you need to define your own rule what can be done, what can't be done, what punishment, or else later it can lead to major mistakes in the plot.
I think that evolution is not something that you can get easily, or else the story would be too rushed. But I also think that feebas can get some side story to show its growth, because apart from 2-3 sentences we can't see much. Maybe some Pokémon battle against weak trainer to see that he became a little bit better.
Personally for all the crime they did, they should at least be imprisoned, attempt of murder, damaging other properties, even if it is a backward town and Pokémon world, what they are doing is like worse than team rocket.
Kaz and Yas didn't say a word and hastened their pace, afraid that someone would come out to beat them up.
Pokemon Hunter
Anime & Comics · Skye12_
Technically in the ninja world a patriarch of Uchiha alive is better than a dead one, the ton of information that he can give is just too huge. Ninja position, nuimber of troops, weak spot, strong spot. I don't know why author want to kill everyone.
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original Anime God System
Marco an average person have the opportunities to go in anime world. Watch his adventure as he became a god. The MC will also be able to travel around different world and use their power. After all it is THE ANIME GOD SYSTEM. There will be multiple girls but that won't go over 3 for the entire story. Final Goal ? Play around all the Multiverse. English is not my first language. Apologize in advance for the bad grammar structure and sentence. I also want to say that my writing is average so don't expect god writing skills. Also if you find fault, some errors or event plot history change that could improve the novel, you could let a comments, i will try my best to improve this fan-fic. This Fan-fic is purely for fun. I don't know the exact time that i will publish the chapter so expect a big lapse between different chapter. I don't own any anime present here in any shape or form, although I wish I did. This is just a fan project. Go support the original if you haven't. I also do not own the cover art, I’ll take it down if the owner wants me to, happily.17 Chs 858 คอลเลกชัน
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Greatest Pokémon Trainer
Anime & Comics · Sounding Stream