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One Piece : Start As Celestial Dragon And Take Down Hancock
4.01 (71 เรตติ้ง)
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Traveling through the world of pirates, he also became a noble Celestial Dragons.
Lakeman just wanted to enjoy a luxurious life.
Unexpectedly, as soon as he attended an auction, he met the three Boa sisters who had just been captured, and the binding system was awakened at the same time.
If you bind a genius, you can get the other person's daily practice feedback.
【You have bound Boa Hancock.】
【You have bound Borsalino.】
[You have bound One Piece’s deputy, Silvers Rayleigh.】
【You have bound Doflamingo.】
"Originally, I just wanted to recruit talents from all over the world, but why are there more and more beautiful girls?" Lakeman looked at the group of beauties beside him and fell into deep thought.
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This is a translated work. Not my original. I have mainly fixed spelling and grammar errors while adding smut to the story.
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hey this is my only review or comment ill make on this ff now since I won't be reading it. It was great for a while, his abilities were cool and was looking forwardto what was next, I would say more but I won't cause I was disappointed with yuri in the harem, I even asked the author if there were any before reading it he said no, usually i take it like a grain of salt read abit before i personally see it or not. Sadly this was the case about chapter 50-52, just would've been great to be told so I didn't need to read it 😕
The protagonist is a dragon, that is, the privileged and ruling class of that world (one piece). I like that the protagonist is not Luffy's pet, and that from the beginning Boa Hancock is saved by the protagonist without putting her status at risk. It is a Chinese novel but the story is not bad, it could be better if the paragraphs that are obviously Chinese are edited.
Imma be real with you, it is another trashy translation. but, why I like it is because the Chinese author isn't just making a wish fulfillment story, he's actually trying to flesh out the characters and make a well developed story with proper characters. My one problem is that I would love if the translator could make the story easier to read with a more natural English based syntax (which I can see the TL is getting better at) but I'm not complaining because we have lemons muhahaha Ch30 btw
Completely pathetic and disappointing, the author/translator has to put the tag Yuri, for people who hate Yuri like me, don't waste your time, Yuri is NTR.
I'mma be honest, The author is Pedophile, so are the reader of his in patreon. This FF contain alot of pornography involving a children. Please report this shit.
Its the wirst of MTL, just blatantly lying with saying "fixed granmar" - there is no fixed grammar, just your typical MTL what makes it unreadable... probably just to promote his patreon - greedy author
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Great fanfic so far. Author doing a pretty good translation and the story is also smooth, hopefully it continue so.
The Mc is just plain unlikable, and the constant gay undertones when he's binding men is annoying and honestly not funny, especially when it's constantly repeated. Also, I don't know why there's a romance tag considering that, so far, none of the girls he's with love him, Hancock has given up and basically accepted her fate but she seems not to enjoy his advances and was relieved when he ignored her. And the other is an undercover agent no need to explain.
not for everybody, slice of lemons, not many fights, and MC will be very OP sinse he is a tenryuubito with a system. still room for some charater develop tho, like MC gain power from system, but it does not increase his will (haki), or give him fighting exp, hope he will work for thouse
This is cool, the truth is that the proposal sounds interesting.............................................................................................
Sensacional y muy pero muy pero muy bueno espero por favor que lo continuas Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias Gracias
I've read every chapter and all I can say is that this fic went to shit real fast, the MCs power is really cool and has a lot of applications, at first he focused on it's development but as the story went on the story devolved into nothing but r18 chapters, the author can't bear the thought to stop thinking with his dick for a while to actually write a normal chapter, this story isn't going anywhere and you should lower your expectations of it drastically or you will be disappointed. In summary, it's terrible, don't even read it.
okayish writing quality. premise of the story and system are pretty interesting and op. but it mainly consists of rather bad smut. mc of rather questionable intelligence in a lot of cases... some moves are ok but they are rare... the romance tag is honestly a big lie since there is no real romance. mc here is more like a slave collector rather *shrug*
I gonna be honest the Story is Bad, it has such an Chinese vibe of One piece that u read out of it, with the young Master Element in it and co. The Figures like Hancock and Kizaru etc. are not themself. I recommend not to waste time on this FF after reading like some chapter ist gets pretty boring