BlueBlueLemon

I don't have plans of adding romance soon.

Taking a complex subject and making it into something simple does not reduce its quality in any way. Instead, it helped us the readers to appreciate it more. This novel is something like that. Coming from the concept of time travel and being placed in the political side and war between two worlds will and always sound confusing. But the author was able to direct the story in a way that we can follow while still having the beauty of these complex topics. Writing is great, characters are good, and there is a lot of potential for the world building. All in all, a recommended read!

Living like a doll. Such a wondeful premise having the protagonists desire to cut their own strings. It may be to change their string of fate or the string they do not want to be, it is a story that dwells on the journey to break loose on these shackles. Relationship between the protagonists is like bread and butter. One compliments the weakness of the other story wise and literally wise. A great romance story with a steady development that is backed with an interesting plot. A good read for this genre!

Author here! I like to thank to those who read Legendary Daddy Merchant and those who stick around. I'm going to say this in advance, but I am planning to make this a long term project so hopefully, I would be able to write a lot of chapters. That is why the story development is a bit slow. It's my way of coping up in real life because in every chapter I write, I at least feel a little accomplishment from it. However, slow it may be, I try to make the journey smooth and enjoyable. So feel free to vote and add it to your library.

I enjoyed it until the end. It was a compelling story to read with two perspectives in the same world with totallt different situations. One born as a baby while the other turned to an armor. Truly unique setting, but what I enjoyed the most was the quirky dialogues the author put up. There are still things to discover so its a recommended read with a whole lot more to offer in the future.

A recommended read! It has that nice steady build up that leads to a great climax which have you wondering if there are more. I like how the characters are not centered on the protagonist alone, and the moments of his teammates does not lose to his. I only hate the part where the author comments the possible dropping of the story. I hope author continues more of it.

This is a review a to motivate and hopefully help the author for later chapters. Since there are barely any chapters yet, I will base mostly on the synopsis for the plot... There are interesting points provided on the synopsis that can easily attract people. But it would be better if author rewrite and fix it to appeal more. The best thing so far is the world background. I can see its potential to be one of this book strong point depending on how the author will continue. And the part where it needs the most improvement, is the technical writing. I am not an English teacherbor anything, but it can be a turn off when some paragraphs are difficult to read. I suggested something in the comments so I hope author sees it. In conclusion. The strong points of the book for the meantime is little. This can be attributed to the lack of chapters, but with good premise, there is a chance for this to be great.