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Ghost Busters

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A guy going by the name of Felix joins the team known as 'Ghost Busters' because of an invitation. A team consisting of 6 members.

Nobody knew his past, nor his personal info. Even his name Felix was an alias created by himself. What was about to come? Was the decision to invite him was correct or everything will crumble?

Felix embarks on his journey along with his new team to unveil the secrets and mysteries of the world, including his own past too.

However, there was another secret to it. Something related to him. Something which defied the laws.

Join Felix on his journey to explore the eerie, unreal, and perilous side of the world as he uncovers the mysteries one by one.

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Author's note :

Hello Everyone! Lonewolf here.
This will be my first novel here. So, please bear that in mind. Also, English is not my first language and I'm not a writer by profession.

Constructive criticism, appreciation, and suggestions are welcomed.

I'll do my best to put all my efforts into augmenting my vocabulary to be as expressive as I can.

So, please do support me. If you find this entertaining then do show your love by voting this and adding it to your library.

Thank you ~

[Warning: This novel doesn't promote any kind of practices shown in this to be executed in real life. This novel is a work of fiction. The characters in this novel are purely based on my imagination. Any resemblance to actual events, locals, or persons, living or dead is coincidental.]

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SEP1A
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This book started off with a bang! As the story develops, it maintains the high energy and pacing introduced in chapter one. I only suggest that the author keep a consistent dialogue form in chapter two (I suggest using only quotation marks as you did in every chapter forthwith) I can’t wait to see how the flames continue to grow!

3yr
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Kandpalbhaskar010

The story is well-written and the plot is interesting and offers a rather unique premise. Instead of ghost story as the title say, it is more like mystery story. (Not complaining though) Characters are well described. There are not many grammatical mistakes. Even though there are some, but it's easy to understand. In the end, this work has a great potential. So, I totally recommend this book to everyone.

3yr
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
TrixiaBlade

Ghost busters in the house y'all.... everything is good. the pace is smoothly sailing . but I like thrillerrrrrr... keep going author as I can see English is not your first language but you still managed to get best... now shameless promotion time ... check out mine too plz😂😂😂

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3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
REaper

Quite an interesting read indeed, I didn't even know when I reached last chapter, Conversations, characters everything is too good. waiting for more

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3yr
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d_nmalory

The book has an interesting start and it is really nice how the author develops the characters dialogues in a way that is understandable and easy to read. So far so good, keep it up author 👌👌

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
BlueBlueLemon

A recommended read! It has that nice steady build up that leads to a great climax which have you wondering if there are more. I like how the characters are not centered on the protagonist alone, and the moments of his teammates does not lose to his. I only hate the part where the author comments the possible dropping of the story. I hope author continues more of it.

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Aeipathy_02

Hmm. Review Proper after reading the latest chapter 12... Writing quality. There are a few grammatical errors but not to the point it hinders your reading. The narratives and dialogues are easy to read too. Stability of Updates. The author has a stable update weekly so far. Story Development. I found it a rather slow pace. But that is understandable since for the first chaps the characters are still getting to know each other. Character Design. The author describes them well. There was also something that set their personalities apart from each other. World Background. Set in modern-day Earth. But still, it is clearly written well. Overall the story has a good and intriguing plot. Keep it up, author!

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Mayemura

Lonewolf, if this is really your first story, then you're are extremely talented. This story is intriguing. Everything from character design, writing quality, world background and updating stability is on point. Keep going, and the sky will be the limit for you. Some days are gold and some days are stones. You said it yourself, "Even the weather cries"

3yr
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ariam_N_M

This book is very interesting to read, it kept me moving from chapter to chapter without stopping. The characters, plot, and different settings are very well developed. Please continue your good work.

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Luzparadise_

first of all, I love your book cover since Fubuki from one punch man is there. She is my waifu so, points for you hahaha joke. Next, the title... I thought it would be horror but it's like a mystery novel. The synopsis is great, it's really interesting, this is pretty interesting and good but in the chapters, you used *smile* instead of using the " *smiles* " You can just use, "She started smiling," "She smiled" or anything that it could describe that person smiling. There is still a lot more to improve but that is part of life and you have potential. Keep writing!

3yr
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Autumn_Equinox

I usually hate reading books in third person but you make me want to! I love the idea and mystery you put into the synopsis! I'm adding to my collection for sure!

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Adwaid_Nambiar

It's a really interesting read. It starts strong with the last ritual scene. Conversations are well written and for the most part everything feels very mysterious and that's a really good sign. I liked the writing as well. I am looking forward to upcoming chapters, Keep up the good work!

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
ClicK_iT

Wow! I appreciate how the author started the story and It’s my first time reading something like that. Overall, I hope it'll go on and author please don't drop it.... Good luck. 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

3yr
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RandomPotato

Very clean way of writing and the story is very interesting. I am so amazed by how you introduced your main character and the supporting characters very well while slowly building up your story. I give you full marks! You deserve it! Gambatte Lonewolf-san!

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Ilovepiesooomuch

I like the name, I like the cover. I also like the synopsis and the opening chapter made me to add the book to my library. It's really an interesting novel. Keep it up.

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Lamelle

This novel is engaging. I have never read this genre before but I feel that it is very interesting. The first chapter made me want to read more. I recommend that you read it.

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Pendragon_DNT

I will give my honest opinion. I've only read a few chapters so far but it looks like a good mystery novel to me, I'm glad it's not a fanfic of the movie of the same name, I'm rooting for a good world construction. Keep striving author.

3yr
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ElaryWakefield

I got to chapter 5 and was disappointed that there are no ghosts. The writing is strong, but I feel I don't care about the characters. There seem to be a lot of interesting moments happening but not a huge string of plot.

3yr
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TofSpades

I like this book the storyline is epic and exciting. The author creates a well-organised world and interesting characters with great personalities. I totally recommend it to anyone looking for something entertaining to read. Well done author!

3yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Itsuki_Suzuki

Writing Quality: Good and readable Updating Stability: Superb and always updated! Story Development: Nice pacing Character Design: It's nice and clean World Background: Had enough to engage more readers.

3yr
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