I like the progress of the story, but it has too many jump cuts. Also, remove the titles, it divides chapters and visual shortens it.
If you just read the last paragraph, it feels like an epilogue. Thanks for the chapter.
yes
If you think I should rewrite, comment yes.
Prodigy In Modern Family
TV · Ryan_S_1577
You could focus more on slice of life
Waiting for Boston Legal cameo.
where are the new chapters?
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then why name him nakada?
A/N fun fact Nakada's mom is Japanese and his dad is not Japanese.
Blue lock: The God of the field
Anime & Comics · ThePpp_Pppp
Please let him turn John carter series into a dune-like franchise as a real challenge for him.
Same energy haha
"Yow, are money maker has arrived!" Willem Dafoe said jokingly and gave Kazir a big hug.
Hollywood What If
Celebrities · pujimaki
It's a decade early for online streaming. Just be a main shareholder have directing rights for the future netflix originals.
Hollywood What If
Celebrities · pujimaki