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Hollywood What If

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4.35 (74 เรตติ้ง)

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Kazir Grey returned to 1994 and decided to pursue his dreams of making movies. With his knowledge, he would take the path of becoming the best director of Hollywood.

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LastGod

MC seems like a sleezy grease ball. overweight untalented loser. Hes using other peoples talent to get ahead and most likely will screw up and ruin it at some point. the ONLY thing that i can say he has going for him is he is hard working. But the whole feel of the novel is sleazy like i need a shower. not fun and cool excited to see him become famous.

1yr
ดู 13 การตอบกลับ
Luicfer_2807

Keep it up. Nice Work man. Write more chapters so your novel can be found in the fan fiction section. I think it is going to be a great story.

1yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Archonstine

It's bad, as in really bad. It could be so much better if the author fixed his diction, syntax, and overall tone of the novel. Also the plot makes no sense, it's extremely unrealistic. But hey, at least it updates every day.

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1yr
ดู 5 การตอบกลับ
Albanian_Gamer

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1yr
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
Cosmic_Witcher

So far so good, u could add more behind the scenes craftbuilding, like Hollywood king, btw u could change genre to movie for more views, Hope u continue to update this novel 😊

1yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Tim_QQQ

the drama is very poorly written. especially the the judges and his ex-wife, the dialogue is so unrealistic it broke all immersion. this happens again and again, none of the antagonists act like real people and the romance is terrible.

8mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
William_Dante

It’s amazing story, but I see a problem almost every chapter. You have to make movies so can you please add the audience reaction so the story can be longer I don’t want this novel to finish too quickly

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1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
ComradeAlexy

My first review. This story is really good. In it, the Protagonist really goes through the hard way to make a good film. This is also not about dependence on the system because it does not exist.The man just returned to the Past and works on films himself without anyone's help. One of my favorite works at the moment. If something is written by a translator because it is weak in English (

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1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Mister_Robot

It's a great attempt by the author. It's hard to believe they started learning English grammar at 18. They should be proud of themself for coming so far. I envy and appreciate such dedicated and talented ppl. That being said, the plot of this story is quite good and I don't have any complaints regarding grammar. What's offputting to me is the Main character. He's such an unlikable and irritating person. He keeps repeating how scared he is of women after his ex wife cheated on him and tried to ruin his life, yet he doesn't stop simping. I don't like harem but it would make more sense if he had casual flings and one night stands instead of clinging on to Reese Witherspoon and reminding the readers how he's intimidated by a relationship with a woman. Make him gay instead or asexual but ffs stop repeating the same thing. I love how the mc swims against the tides to complete his films and make them successful, however the story always is a stalemate when he turns into a simp.

2mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Siuuu
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This is one of the better Hollywood novels , but for me it has quite slow pacing.I hope that author will add extra things related to Hollywood except movie making like creating netflix or other Money making things.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Albanian_Gamer

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1yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Mr_Aryan_Pradhan

good novel man just keep writing it and give us more chapters

1yr
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
KAAL23

When Are you going to Upload New Chapters Author.

5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Bast_Zahir

A great story keep it up, my ony complaint is that it doesnt have more than 100 fhapters.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Fito
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well the novel is not bad, but it follows the same formula as other hollywood novels, although it is still very early where the story is going.

1yr
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Azerath_Gamer

Гавно, и автор видимо куколд так как любят когда его персонажей предают или используют. аоаоаоаоаоаооаоаоааоаоаооооааоаоаапнш63щгкшкжшежкжшежкженжнщжещщнющнющнющнющздддпюдпюдюдеы

15d
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
MercenaryRollen

trash 👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

24d
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
wagner_cabral

No patreon do autor está quase nos 500 capítulos essa novel, mas aqui ele lança quando lembra. uma pena, vemos diversos autores que mesmo com sua história bem avançada no patreon, eles se dão ao trabalho de listas vários capítulos nessa plataforma, programada para lançar dia e hora marcada.

25d
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
SageRaOne_7

Usually i write a detailed review But this is good .................. there are many miniscule mistakes but the story is engaging So /// i recommend it.

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1mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Aiden_silvereye

Imagine a 60 year old man working his whole life on film Sat/ film making but act like he has seen props and film star first time. Even after seeing harsh reality of Hollywood he saw actor and actress his role model after he return in the past Like a youth who just enters the society

6mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ

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