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Troglodyte in the Dungeon (Danmachi/JJK)

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"Love's gonna get you killed.

But pride's gonna be the death of you,
and you and me.

And you and you."

A arrogance riddled dickhead with a good pinch of pettiness gets transmigrated.

That's a problem though.

When a rat's shoved into a corner, it will always scurry out.
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This is a Fanfiction, I own nothing except the OC.

NO-HAREM lots of gore and rambling.

Update schedule will be honestly the most crooked you will ever see. I don't have my laptop and writing from phone is cancer.

A/N: First time writing and allathat shazzaz, I just started this cause I wanted to portray a lot more crude and thuggish main character.

Based of younger me's mental and emotional view so he should be pretty damn unlikable.

Who am I kidding I'm still like this. Lots of slurs and such are inbound, your dealing with a character rivaling young master's, just with a more crooked mouth.

I feel like I should have a lot more to say about my first try at this, but I really don't.

No smut, probably? R-18 is only there for the gore.

This probably won't catch on with a lot of people, I'm just writing just to see if I can pour some time into a hobby since I can't really play video games till I'm comatose anymore.

Critique the fighting scenes, I wanna have pride in them. Just a whole lot of unstandard stuff.

I say this again, the upload schedule is AAAASS. Don't get too into it, I'll leave you hanging for weeks.
also,
Don't webnoveltard in my comments. I don't want to hear you wanna be Gary Stus.

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Ayub_Novel

i really like the humor and dialog a lot; it's so much fun watching someone absolutely roast characters, and I like the fights a lot. All thats missing from this master piece is number of chapters. i regret finding this gem so soon.10/10 from me

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TheWaffleMonarch

very good, fantastic, excellent, amazing

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