/ Anime & Comics / Troglodyte in the Dungeon (Danmachi/JJK)
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"Love's gonna get you killed.
But pride's gonna be the death of you,
and you and me.
And you and you."
A arrogance riddled dickhead with a good pinch of pettiness gets transmigrated.
That's a problem though.
When a rat's shoved into a corner, it will always scurry out.
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This is a Fanfiction, I own nothing except the OC.
NO-HAREM lots of gore and rambling.
Update schedule will be honestly the most crooked you will ever see. I don't have my laptop and writing from phone is cancer.
A/N: First time writing and allathat shazzaz, I just started this cause I wanted to portray a lot more crude and thuggish main character.
Based of younger me's mental and emotional view so he should be pretty damn unlikable.
Who am I kidding I'm still like this. Lots of slurs and such are inbound, your dealing with a character rivaling young master's, just with a more crooked mouth.
I feel like I should have a lot more to say about my first try at this, but I really don't.
No smut, probably? R-18 is only there for the gore.
This probably won't catch on with a lot of people, I'm just writing just to see if I can pour some time into a hobby since I can't really play video games till I'm comatose anymore.
Critique the fighting scenes, I wanna have pride in them. Just a whole lot of unstandard stuff.
I say this again, the upload schedule is AAAASS. Don't get too into it, I'll leave you hanging for weeks.
also,
Don't webnoveltard in my comments. I don't want to hear you wanna be Gary Stus.
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เขียนรีวิวนักเขียน Mistyar
i really like the humor and dialog a lot; it's so much fun watching someone absolutely roast characters, and I like the fights a lot. All thats missing from this master piece is number of chapters. i regret finding this gem so soon.10/10 from me