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Ethan Hayes had traveled to the dangerous world of Marvel comics. Thankfully, he was equipped with a system that allowed him to obtain the power of the Frozen Fruit—without the curse that typically came with it.
“Damn it, Ethan!” Gwen Stacy shouted. “This is my newest black-and-white Spider suit, and now it’s torn to shreds!”
Wanda Maximoff crossed her arms, giving him a stern look. “Ethan, that move with flipping the Eiffel Tower? You’re still not doing it right. And for the record, the door to my room isn’t closing tonight… You know what that means.”
Natasha Romanoff, also known as the Black Widow, sighed in frustration as she glanced at the thermometer. “Why does it hit 40°C one second, then drop to 0°C the next? What’s going on with you?!”
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Overall a normal fic, but as in all Chinese works there are things like: racism, nationalism, propaganda and strange manner of speech and narration
Overall, I would say this is a fairly good translation. However, the issue of racism from the original work remains. For instance, there's phrasing like: 'He is disliked due to his Chinese descent and because his parents were murdered by a Black man.' This detail is unnecessary and confusing, as it doesn’t make sense how the ethnicity of one's parents' murderer would affect someone's popularity.
author please if you are translating this Chinese novel at least try to make it good and avoid all the nationalism and racist shit they put in it (( I am not even angry at u but this just ruined my day ))
Not great, not terrible... The biggest downside of this novel is, once again, the relationship development is non-existent, and MC just collects women with few lines of speech... that's a really big no-no; it makes the entire thing rather unreal. The novel doesn't really have much depth, shame, cause the premise was good. Some will have problems with racism and nationalism, but for me, that's just how things are in the Chinese novels these days, especially fanfics like Marvel or DC; there is no point of complaining about that and be angry about that. Once you read through many novels like that, you will be able to automatically ignore all of those things on your own. Otherwise, it's just your average Chinese fanfic... if you just want to kill some time, then it will probably serve the purpose.
I've read till chapter 39 before I couldn't take it anymore. The plot holes in this fanfic are too big to ignore, many times mid chapter the direction suddenly change without any warning nor context. This is more noticeable between one chapter to another, chapter X can end about a certain subject and then chapter Y begins on another subject altogether as if a few paragraphs were missing from the new chapter. The system of the MC also changes all the time with his points always decreasing and increasing without any pattern, though I'm not really surprised since this is a Chinese fanfic after all and they're notoriously known to be bad at keeping track of system points... The translation also was done somewhat okay but with plenty of mistakes here and there.
Only managed to get to beginning of chapter 4. Straight Chinese mtl rip. No editing whatsoever. Names are wrong. Idiot MC talks to his system out loud while in a conversation with other people. So stupid.
I found the storyline of this story quite entertaining. I don't think the author is exaggerating the facts at all. While white people are trying to solve the problem of black people being discriminated against, black people discriminate against and attack Asian people, which we see almost every day. It's not strange that the author uses real stories in the story.
The chapters are out of order, but it is an interesting concept for a story. I would only recommend it if your willing to ignore the chapters are out of order and are willing to read another Chinese translated fanfiction.
It's another shitty novel where the protagonist hides his power, webnovel is riddled with this cliché. Ndkdkdkdnfjfucucjcjvkvjckfkdkfkfkkfkfkfkfi ufdjndjfufdkfjugjffjifufndndnfixisnebf
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Very funny, sad that Chinese novels don't have lemon scenes, anyway could the author say the original name of the work in Chinese please?........................
I’ll be honest, this story started off well for the most part, but it has gone downhill. The main issues are as follows: The constant name changes of the main character make it confusing to know who is being referred to half the time. There are too many ideas and plot points happening at once, and they aren’t being blended together effectively. One moment, the focus is on one event, and in the next sentence, the scene has shifted to something entirely different. A lot of critical information is missing that could help explain what’s going on, and the chapters feel jumbled and disorganized, making it even harder for readers to follow the story.
Authored doesn't really know much about marvel, also confuses mera from DC with whoever "Mela" is multiple times. There is bad character development, we basically learn that his system gives him mystery boxes (that don't corelate to their tier usefulness wise), these mystery boxes always have what the character needs. The author slows down the story (in my opinion dragging it out purposely) by saying he was "afraid of freezing new York" because of how good the upgrade would be. Could be possible but sound like it's just dragging it out. Try it or don't, just a warning.
I think out of some of the fanfics adapted to Chinese, This can be considered one of the best. Although the mannerisms in speech still has a touch of how conversation took place on Chinese people. All I can say that this is good and atleast you're not giving the characters random powers that is not related to the title, this makes the story very unique becoming OP using powers revolving around ice. Good Luck.
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Premise is good, but what do you expect from a Chinese novel? racism against black people and them thinking they're superior (the chinese) needs to be proofread and deleted the overly exaggerated parts.