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Every coin has two faces. Goodness is balanced by evil. Any concept has a counterpart.
New Casablanca was the same. A fantastic city full of science and progress, yet such a dark side so dirty no one dares even talking about it. This is the hometown of a young man, Fell Pluck. Unfortunately, it was decided by the gods that he should be born in the slums of the city, the core, where you had to fight every day in the hope of living another one.
"Choose your path, change your destiny, show your might. Unleash your will and show them your worth. I revealed to you the way of cultivation; the rest is up to you.." A.
In the end, like a butterfly softly landing on a petal, a simple encounter can change the course of events...
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Only let me posted one review so... 1st; Why is it that every fcking cultivation novels are always the same... hi brother, lil sister, big brother etc IT MAKES NO SENSE. Especially in this story when its meant to be an evolved earth. We do NOT talk like that... talk like a normal person please. Other than this its an alright read, cant say much more as barely anything has happened Authors comment; Well, thanks for the review. As for the brother, lil sister, and big brother, in my hometown those terms are still quite used. And as the first city in the novel is based on where I'm actually from, then I don't find it out of place to use those terms. My comment after; Oh can understand then, for me where I live its very weird. I mean I can read stories that have it but cause ive read to many its got to the point It annoys me whenever I see it. Hopefully later on not everyone will use it ? As its still meant to be earth and there should be many languages if you get me ? Well anyway Ill carry on and see where it goes gl ! Final review xD Okay so carried on reading but when he meets 'wind' it gets confusing af. The english is terrible and very hard to follow, this has happened throughout the story but it was bearable however turned very prominent at this time. Also nothing against it but not into yaoi as im straight... when he meets wind it turns yaoi, with him calling mc big brother and blushing red. Not into that sort of thing but if you are then yeah carry on lel. This does need a tag for it thou, or atleast say has yaoi vibe at points or something. Also this is very slow pace, I don't mind slow pace but it has to move forward atleast. For the whole story now nothing has rly happened. I was hoping when he acc left the slums he would access the internet atleast.. learn something about the world. However the whole time he has been there hes done fck all. Another thing is the ai, it should be a lot more prominent in the story as itll be key for him knowing about the world and helping. However it seems like it's forgotten and is barely used. Only being used to explain something to help the mc. I mean he has used it like once ? why... Finally going back to this 'wind' character it makes zero sense for the mc to start training him... the mc isnt strong. He is still in the first level of both body, soul cultivation and hasnt even begun energy. So why is he helping someone train and follow him ? Also with the mc getting all his techniques from the messai fam other than his sword arts what tf is he gonna train the guy in ? All he knows are secrets he can't teach to outsiders... plus he knows fck all about cultivation. He only knows what he has been given, so he could teach maybe the basics but nothing else. But then again why is he waisting his time.. other than for the yaoi route. Then for awhile now he has been acting like some wise master at everything, being arrogant af. Its like the slums left no mark on him and is just used as a sob story. Its had no effect on the story so far, other than a sad backstory. Overall it seems like cultivation novel with loads of potential but ruined with loads of wholes turning it mediocre. Not meant to be a harsh review, just my honest thought on what ive read. It may be the authors first novel or even improve loads later on as the story goes on.
Original and refreshing characters, vividly described fighting scenes, after the first 20 chapters I am frankly stunned this story has never been picked up and read by more people. This is NOT the same cut and paste machine scrambled translation you find everywhere on this site. This is good, really good.
Author-edge, is yes..........great novel like the MC personality and the way his lookout of the world, his never ending will to improve like any other MC, but the difference is that Feli is too tanacious........like the novel keep it up the great work.....and don't stress yourself?
I like the book. 123456765432345676543234567898765434567898765434567898765432345678765432345676543234567876543wdfvbnjhytrfcvbhytrfghytrfgbhjuytfgbnjuytfgbhjuytrfhyt FILLER TADA!
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I really enjoy how detailed the world building is, it makes me want to learn more about the history of this place. There were also a lot of grammar errors, though not enough to stop me from understanding the story. I was also a bit confused as to why Anzar, a fighter from a rich family, accepted Fell as a friend so quickly. It seemed a bit abrupt. Other than that, keep up the good work!
I found out about this novel through the Phenomenal Author Writing contest and I'm honestly pleasantly surprised. The story is quite interesting. It's a little bit obvious that the author isn't an English native but it doesn't really gives a lesser understanding of the story. Mistakes are present here and there, but improvement shows as the chapters evolve. Keep going mr. author
Dude what the hell ?? Your story started of nice had good plot but now it went to **** !! I have read till ch 48 and going to drop it..you had a good story line but destroyed it yourself..i mean what the hell a city governed by family where is govt ? Police handled by them... What military?? He went and invaded a military factory and what happened ****..what the ****..he suddenly becomes cold blooded killer in an unknown city in open ..you randomly jump from one thing to another which affects readers..your background of story is ****...i mean i liked it but you ruined it ..
Novel is just great. It starts off interesting, and slowly gets better and better. MC is actually pretty humble and functions more of less like a real person not some robot. Still has some instances of Wuxia shameless MC but it's few and far between. The world is a big amalgamation of many genres, having fantasy, cultivation, and even Sci-fi elements all working together to create a really very interesting world. Biggest bonus for me so far is that while their are criminals and arrogant nobility, nobody has a vendetta against the MC yet. No annoying cultivators trying to kill Mc just because he is hanging around a girl they like (at least not in the physical world). Overall it's really been just a pleasure to read so far.
The story is really good. This is my first review on webnovel and this story deserves to be reviewed. I really liked dungeon Prowler before this novel, and i tink it has a similar mindset of the protagonist, working hard for the sake of it. Keep going author, good job till now!!
I enjoyed the chapters that are out so far and highly recommend reading it. The world building is amazing and the characters are great. (the most important part IMO because it doesn't matter if the novel has everything else going for it if the characters are **** I won't read it lol) So far the only gripe I have with it are the grammatical errors I've seen here and there but even they were not that bad so I'd say definitely give this one a try.
Despite being labelled as an eastern fantasy, even using a cultivation system, this very much feels like a gritty science fiction. Think Bladerunner with psychic powers added to it. This review is part of a review swap and valid as of chapter 18. The story is written in third person point of view past (usually) tense. If you like your worlds dirty and gritty this is your place. Especially if you like the type of tale that follows someone from rags to... well... we don't know yet. Power in one way or another, but eighteen chapters we've just left the introduction behind us. If the story develops in the direction I believe it will, then the main character has just finished the deed that forces him to enter the wider world. If you took note of me referring to this story as science fiction rather than fantasy it's because the cultivation system is explicitly explained in sci-fi terms and very much not as magic. So for the stars: Writing: Three stars. Shaky English paired with undisciplined handling of PoV and tenses detract from the reading experience. A pity because this promises to be a really good story. Updates: 18 chapters. No complaints. Five stars. Story: As I wrote earlier, a really good story. Five stars. Character: It's hard to have a really good story about a single main character unless that character is well fleshed out. He is. Five stars. World: Well, I did compare it to Bladerunner. While the setting this far has been physically rather small, not once did I feel crammed in as a reader. Good work and five stars. This goes into my library in the hopes that the writing gets better.
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I have not started this but looks good, just one mistake that I see. There is more than two sides on a coin. at least 3 sides; Front, Back, and side.
You are literally one of my favorite authors on this site.. I will look at your book for pointers for my novel.. also you book is really good.
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I'm having quite a good time reading this novel. The story feels fresh and the world building is rather interesting. There's quite the amount of grammatical errors in the beginning but I'm noticing change and improvement after each chapter. I'm definitely going to follow this. Don't drop this, don't leave Fell to his dire destiny!
Refreshing world building. I think it is pretty cool to have a new take on the cultivation world. It will be interesting to see how it develops in the future. There are some ****** grammar mistakes etc. I believe an editor will be able to help with your work. That said, reading through the work, it does feels as if the author has put in effort into his grammar and such. All the best!
The story has an interesting concept but it's little hard to read due mistakes in grammar, spelling and so on. You should use Grammarly or find yourself an editor. Another option is type in google "Online corrector" there are few good correctors that will help you correct your mistakes. I hope it's not the story for a contest and you will just drop it right after. Good luck!
I haven't even started this yet, but I'm hoping... Hoping that it won't be a Harem. The premise sounds vague yet interesting... Please... I'd rather have no romance at all if it isn't harem. Maybe it is really good though and I'll continue reading if harem appears... But that is rarely the case. Wish me luck!