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The Game Creator in Marvel(News)
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Tell me, what would happen if a regular man reincarnated and spent his young life in the Marvel Universe to only find that upon reaching 20 Years Old, he would get his Gold Finger?
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the idea of the story is good only that mc is flat and it seems that he has no relations apart from the home pc, there are 0 conversations of chapters are slightly short, it looks more like a diary than a story because mc in addition to training it seems that he does not have aspirations or cravings, it also seems easy to study magic as if he drinks water, the story is not about the games he creates nor how the players feel is very superficial, I think the author is new because even if the idea is good and innovative, the story seems flat and repeating, I hope the author improves both in the text of the story, the dialogues and the interactions, but also to lengthen the chapters and tell more what he does and what the players or npc do Sorry i used GT
I'm here to give 5 Stars because I like the premise of this story. It's very unique and creative. Keep up the great work. I'll follow your story diligently.
It's not a bad story but I just gave up after the whole illegal fight thing started There is literally no reason for it. The MC is supposedly living like a hermit to stay safe in the Marvel world and then suddenly decides to risk his life and possible arrest for some quick cash, why not just get a job. PS he has already made like $100 selling his game in the last week. He wants combat experience - if only he could I don't know create some sort of VR combat training game ----------------- Aditional the MC is meant to have lived in Marvel for 20 years but there is no mention of his family, it makes it seem like he has never been on the internet before and why would he wait till now to try and remember future knowledge
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Story had potential with the game creating but then it became trash, then it became a dumpster fire. MC gets NPCs but they are actually real people so have fun with that..... but the worst thing is the awful OC they is with the MC. Makes no sense to create a random OC when there are so many characters in Marvel. Just awful. Then somehow professor X is able to find him? Trash. He tries to read his mind and the MC just says stop? Trash. Now the Ancient One found him but she wasnt able to before? Was it because or the trash forced part with Professor X somehow finding him? No idea but this was a complete waste of time that i regret reading. Dumpster fire of a fic
Good stroy with a few minor flaws, i.e doesn't really go into the backstory of mc ( might change in the future ), also mc isn't really hiding his powers but other than that its good. I wish to see were the author takes this novel. ( ch 14? )
i really like it hoping for more chapters i really like it hoping for more chapters i really like it hoping for more chapters i really like it hoping for more chapters
it was good but then the protagonist started to share his magic with other people even though he himself isn't even in the top power levels yet.
I loved the novel till now...the quality is good negligible to non existent grammatical mistake the only bad thing about the novel is you have to wait for it...😅😅😅😅
Ayo bro! This is just absolutely amazing! Waited long for something with that idea to be with good quality. Keep it up my dude, very cool! :)
It would be amazing if you add some horrors in this title. I think it would be interesting to see players searching Easter eggs and finding the plot.
Too rush. .. Seriously..it's great concept but the plot is too rushing. First he make battle Royale game and a little bit of reaction from the player. And than he make another 2 game?? Where's another reaction? Or when the player's use their golden apple reaction? And conflict? If you're don't fix it, it will become boring novel Use Chinese store owner novel plot, most of people enjoy reading those. Maximum Rezpect!!
It's really good!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏keep it up dude!!!💕💕💕👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
The idea is good the parts used to make the story and the execution of the idea just don't really fit that well . From the very beginning there is a lack of reason for why he has to make games, he just makes a game without even a real explanation what he gains. The biggest problem of the story is that it's not really integrated into the MCU or Xman world. It feels forced at best. At some points there is a real lack of explanation why something happens and at other points the story get overly complicated like with the whole NPC debacle. The idea is good but the story lacks clear development and solid world and Character Design
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Like usual, unholy builds a marvelous story that has roped me in with curiosity and hopefulness while only having 10 chapters. It would be amazing if this novel continued and created its own place as one of the few novels that keeps me on this site!
14 chapters in you might think that isnt much your right i dropped this because this isnt what i was looking for i wanted a story about the games not a story about how the mc gets stronger unnecessary at that 14 chapters in and we only got 1 view inside the game you think with a title like that you would get more but nope i dont want to bother reading more i know il only get disappointed and dont get me started on how rushed the story was it felt like the author was trying to rush the story to get the story somewhere I know for sure this story was intended without the game making thingy because of the mc He says he was low on money, hmm strange he has a game make cosmetics but then i thought about why he may wanted a clean incoming for you know taxs BUT NOOO HE GOES TO ANOTHER COUNTRY USING THE AIRPLANE JOINS IN AN ILLEGAL FIGHTING PLACE FOR MONEY i was wrong I was confused i thought of this desision in a way without the game making thingy and it made sense i dont know why he wanted money but if it was for some plans it would make sense This entire fanfiction was seems to be intended without the game making system now I know I shouldn't bother reading further
Magical contract ruined the story. He basically made himself a slave. Please rewrite the last chapter.
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