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4.21 (23 เรตติ้ง)

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THIS BOOK IS ON A HIATUS until May 2023 (10 chapters), September 29th (15) chapters, and December or October 30th, 2023 (30+ chapters). See you then!

Sound-minded Author synopsis

The book follows a man whose soul drifted from earth to another body in a different world upon his death. He becomes a Demi-god with a system. He journeys out to become stronger while helping his father (a god) take revenge on those that nearly killed him.

Unhinged Author Abstract

It's about a human who becomes a Demi-god and has a system. The characters are evil, at least by human standards; you would rarely find a goody-to-shoe sub-character. The major character is a bipolar sociopath and still will be anywhere he goes. He has a few principles, but that depends on his mood (bipolar). This book will have a lot of action, action, and action, and killings, especially assassinations. I hate the slow pace, there will be slow chapters to create the setting but I will limit them as much as possible. If this book was a drug, then I would be a drug dealer getting high off my supply. I also hate cliffhangers, sometimes there is a need for them but damn do these authors even have a heart, messing with my emotions. I will limit this too. It sounds stupid, but I created this book for myself. Sometimes it's best to put crazy on paper. There is comedy here, too, not the forced kind. If I write and it shows up, it shows up. I admit I Am the type that loves a satisfying kill. I will give you a good kill once a week. So far in every chapter, someone dies.
This book will go all over Greek mythology, Chinese mythology, crazy powers and abilities, religion, gods, Demi-gods, different universes, different planes, badass weapons, and more.

THE PHOTO Isn't MINE. FOUND ON PINTEREST! I WILL POST 1 CHAPTER a week! Minimum 4 chapters a month! (working 2 jobs))

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    farmer_with_dimple

    Hey, the author here! first time writing a book. Originally I wrote this because it upset me that some system novel novels that have an awesome name but are a little disappointing. I hope that I don't want to fall in the same category. I am not so strong with grammar but I hope to improve as I write.

    3yr
    ดู 39 การตอบกลับ
    Dustypirate009

    I will wait till this Novel accumulate more chapters till 40-50. Nothing against you but I hate waiting for chapter. But to encourage you to keep writing I am giving it 5. Keep writing. If it reaches 200 chapters it will be hit.

    3yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    carl_dean

    Wooo****** awesome book. This book captured my attention, it is actually fast pace. This book takes you straight to the point, every detail is well explained. We need more books like this👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

    3yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    DaoisthwMuc4

    Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood Goooooooooooooooooooooooooood

    3yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    t650825t

    Gooooooooooood goooooood goooooood goooooooooooooooood oooooooooooood goooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooood oooooooooooood

    3yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Fk_Fk
    LV 4 Badge

    fast is goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood

    3yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Cynthia_Joseph_3903

    This book is similar to a real anime series, it locks you in and you never want to stop reading it. I am looking forward for the author to release a second book. It was mind blowing. It is worth the time reading.

    3yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Julio_Negron

    This book is straight up oerfect love it lots man i can honestly see myself acting like the mc in my daily life this book just sucks u in like u were the mc love it

    3yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    DaoistUSU8gl

    the charater development is awesome. the writing gets better after chapter 9. the MC isnt upur tpically stupid mc and he doesnt want to save the world. which is so refreshing!

    3yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    MadThelric

    This story is about a sociopath who suddenly is in a situation where he gets powers and a fresh start to continue being an evil one. Here you won't find the typical goody two shoes, but something akin an honorable bad guy: he'll treat you well if you treat him well, and will destroy you completely if you cross him (regardless if you've treated him well before). So far the story goes well. There're issues with grammar and spelling that sometimes cause a bit of confusion, but nothing too serious. If you wish to try your luck with an evil MC, this story looks promising. 😈

    3yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Merline_1

    Amazing!!! Scenery and characters brought to life !!!! The humor keeps btinging me back😂. im rooting for everything Alex is Doing!!!!

    3yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    sin64920

    really good place in the book so far mc is ruthless and dark it's an amazing change compared to save the world type mcs and it's got a good balance of humor mixed in

    3yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Edhyier
    LV 14 Badge

    Sinopsis ESTE LIBRO ESTÁ EN UNA PAUSA hasta mayo de 2023 (10 capítulos), el 29 de septiembre (15) capítulos y el 30 de diciembre u octubre de 2023 (más de 30 capítulos). ¡Hasta entonces! Esta es su sipnosis actual hace 2 años prometio y critico otras novelas de sistema diciendo que no queria caer igual. Dentro de 1 año pondra otra etiqueta igual y seguira diciendo lo mismo. No recomiento leer a un autor que critica y dice que va a hacer una novela mejor cuando ni siquiera cumple con su palabra. Todo son excusas y criticas a otra persona, deberia mirarse a si mismo. No entiendo como la gente le valora con 5 estrellas para darle animos, cuando no pasa ni de 44 capitulos

    12mth
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    Lord_Heydrich

    5 stars in all Categories! Keep up the good work!

    3yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    Xeviathan

    Writing quality is pretty good. Author has some grammatical errors but it's easy to overlook them. Story development is very detailed. Author thoroughly explains the settings, the mc's thought process/actions. Cool thing author does is showing different POVs of the same scenarios which gives you a broader view of what's happening. Only thing author mainly needs to work on is the updating stability aspect which I'm sure will be gone soon after they get into a steady writing environment. Overall, story is amazing and keeps making you wanting more. Yikes, I wrote a lot 😬😄

    3yr
    ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
    DaoistUSU8gl

    the book is really dark with a lot of plot twist. the writing improves after 15. this author has a unique persepective of what readers who crave action want.

    3yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    A_Sinner

    Finally the Author who understand and know my taste and that is why you deceive the 5 stars .............................................. .................................. ................

    3yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    DeusaderVulting

    I have not read this as of typing this but the synopsis literally put what I can only describe as the creepiest smile on my face. I want to read this with all my heart and soul now. I'm going in! LEEEROOOOOOOOY JENJIIIIIINS!

    3yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
    CHRIS2169XP

    havent read it yet but synopsis literally has me dying to read it it has all the hidden and horrifying desires I have 😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

    3yr
    ดู 0 การตอบกลับ

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