/ Fantasy / Surviving By Relying On My Yandere Fiancee
Surviving By Relying On My Yandere Fiancee
3.96 (18 เรตติ้ง)
เรื่องย่อ
Meet Elysion, the third prince trapped in a romantic RPG nightmare!
He’s the ultimate underdog, hated sidekick with a fatal fate. But guess what? Elysion’s got a game-changing plan, after all he is harry and has got his past life wisdom.
No more canceling engagements and diving into disastrous endings. This time, he’s sidestepping fiancée drama from the get-go.
The twist?
The Duke’s daughter, once his top pick, is a powerhouse of possessiveness and obsession – A TOTAL YANDERE
Get ready for a rollercoaster of love, survival, and unexpected turns in this RPG adventure!
******
A/N: Though it’s yandere(obsessive female lead) it's not serious, it will be soothing and can except many comedic scenes.
Hoping, you will give it a try regardless of your liking to yandere or not.
แท็ก
แฟนๆ
-
![EvilGumShoes]()
EvilGumShoes ให้ความสนใจ 2080 -
![SaltyLR]()
SaltyLR ให้ความสนใจ 1986 -
![Steven_Spoon]()
Steven_Spoon ให้ความสนใจ 1658
ของขวัญ
-- ได้รับของขวัญแล้ว สถานะพลังงานรายสัปดาห์
-- การจัดอันดับด้วยพลัง 
-- หินพลัง คุณอาจชอบ
18รีวิว
3.96
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
แบ่งปันความคิดของคุณกับผู้อื่น
เขียนรีวิว
Well MC is annoying. I mean there is so much self doubt, always thinking and so many internal monologues. I mean he thinks so much, questions so much, there are so many "flashback" info dump about the past game knowledge constantly it gets boring. He also has a beta personality a little which is irksome. Rather than talk or say things and take action there is so much speculation it gets boring. MC is not a man of action, also he is an idiot. MC is in a life or death situation which would risk not only his fiance, her maid (assassin), all because he jumps out to save a cat. I mean this is idiotic as there was no way to tell how it would go. Also his weapon being a shield (which is a animal that transforms into a shield) is kind of boring. Also in most novels where due to having knowledge of the game MC can find cheats etc well this world is too restrictive. MC even despite knowing so much about game doesnt really know what to do. Also MC has no cheats or abilities which were hidden. He has high magic, but cant use magic but his unique ability is to only be able to use physical attacks but his physical body is weak compared to others. Then he decides to use the shield but I mean if your agility is slow how can you defend properly? The premise and story are interesting but the execution is tedious and not worth it for me and not engaging enough
it is good but will become trash if it turns out to be harem...............................................................................................
so, the only problem I am having is that the MC is an idiot why you ask? well, a maid is simply disrespecting the MC who is a royal and he does nothing about it because she is one of the other 100 heroines. dude if the royalty is disrespected then that person can lose their life and here, he is like ok you can freely insult me go ahead. sorry but the MC's behavior ruined the story for me, so I am out.
*ahem* (kindly skip the below review) Embark on a literary escapade sculpted by the masterful strokes of my narrative wand. I weave tales where characters transcend the mundane, becoming vibrant souls etched into the reader's heart. My plots? A rollercoaster ride of wit and emotion, leaving you breathless at every twist. Dialogues dance on the precipice of humor and poignancy, creating a symphony for your mind. Brace yourself for a storytelling odyssey where each word is a brushstroke painting a vibrant tapestry of imagination. In this realm, I am not just an author; I am the architect of stories that linger in your thoughts long after the last page turns. I will answer all your questions in this comment section!
Dropped at chapter 44. The premise is super interesting but the execution is bad. The Authors grammar isn’t great, with constant misspellings, missing words, wrong genders, and incorrect names. There are many repeated paragraphs, and even repeated ending paragraphs at the start of the next chapter. Coins are NOT cheap and padding word count with repeated paragraphs from the last chapter is unacceptable. I read one comment from a reader who pointed out a similarity with another novel they read. After that, you start to see different names being used for the main cast that don’t show up at all before then. This makes me wonder if the Author is copy/pasting from another work and attempting to edit it into their own story. The MC chooses a shield for his main weapon and his stats/abilities limit him a lot. I personally do not like MCs like this, though this is my biased opinion. It’s very clear the MC will not be super OP after training a ton. Honestly, don’t waste your hard bought coins on this unless the Author goes back and fixes everything and keeps it fixed going forward. If they do, it would be a decent read but nothing great.
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์
The story is literally in the title already, so you have to shutdown all your braincells because the only relevant in here is the Yandere and not the MC at all. -MC doesn't have any ambition at all despite being a prince and he want to become a worthy man for his fiancee, a prince yet still not worthy enough? then why not become the Emperor, oh yeah he doesn't have any ambition other than surviving while making more enemies. -MC always try to avoid or push heroines away from him. Of course what MC doing is just fueling up the hatred/dislikes from him so making more another death flag so its useless anyway. -This kind of MC cannot kill despite he is in era of medieval, something that in unavoidable. -If you just want to waste time reading a RomCom Yandere like this, then this 1 is for you. I don't recommend this. remember, MC doesn't have any ambition, MC also irrelevant.
The main character uses a shield as his primary weapon. His fear of deviating from the plot is misinterpreted as kindness by his fiancée. He cries during their second meeting. I am okay with character development, but not when I disagree with almost every choice he makes.
review at ch 47 The pacing and characters are well written. I do see that this takes on a strong Japanese novel type of writing where the male mc is a oblivious/effortless lady killer while still being timid or cautious. This is still the beginning of the novel, so MC still has a bit of his naive side while the FL is gushing over his everything with rose tinted glasses (including his kindness). He doesn't really support fighting and he doesn't want to kill. I do hope he gets over his kindness or naive mindset. He doesn't want revenge (where I read), but just wants to avoid the main characters despite them despising and trying to tarnish him. In turn, I'm waiting for the MC to grow a backbone to get things done and have some charisma. Good read, but I am frustrated with this character at the moment. If this is what the author had in mind though... it's working.
Only a single digit review number? Let me fix that with a review of mine 🤩⭐🌟🌠✨📖✨🌠🌟⭐🤩 Sigh...... I miss Webnovel Daily Rewards for giving 1 review everyday..... Back then, every good Novel would have 100+ Reviews
I loved it so much❤️😊 Please continue, i will look forward for it🌹🌹🌹🌹 ....................................................................
characters are a bit shallow. the mc is a crybaby. otherwise it's pretty decent so far.
I read 15 chapters. and I drop it, I can't stand the MC, just not my cup of tea, I like yanderes if there are any in the story (you already have me half in to the bag) either as a secondary character or even better if it's the FMC as is the case here, aniways give a chance to the history and judge for yourselves after all as the saying goes “there’s no accounting for taste” and this is only my personal opinion.
i already rated it 5 star because of the title but is it harem? (hope not even though I don't mind i still want it to be not harem)
good concept, good plot line, unique power system can't say much about it because there is not much there explained about it. Now where it starts to fall off is that the word counts are so low, grammerlitical problems, repeated paragraph from the last chapter for some reason? that takes 10% of the chapter. MC's afraid of dying? when he literally changed so many things from the movement he came to the world, acts like a cliche dense Japanese mc. Characters are basically one dimensional finance whole personality is being a yandere apparently. update are so rare. hope author fixes it otherwise it's all downhill if this keeps on going like this.
I don't write reviews but this novel seems great so I will write my first one in hopes that more people will read it as well. And if you think about whether to give it a try after seeing this review?Well read it and see for yourself if you like it as well.