Shu Senju

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Hasu_Yodd

Can't take it any more, didn't understand what was going on. He is inside glass tank in every chapter but how did he get in, is someone experimenting on him?? is he reborn?? is he uchiha ??? is he senju ?? did he reincarnate once or twice ???? Story is a complete mess ?????.

LV 1

Anas_AsBEIY

القصة نفسها جيدة قي البداية الشخصيات جامدة لكن بدأ المؤلف يتحسن هناك بعض الارباك حيث يتكلم عن امور غريبة ويدخلها في القصة واكن المتخوى والفكرة مذهلة اعتقد بعد تحسنه لو يعيد تحريرها ستصبح قصة خارقة أشكرك على مجهودك الرائع The story itself is good at the beginning, the characters are rigid, but the author began to improve, there is some confusion where he talks about strange things and introduces them into the story, and I was the one who was afraid, and the idea is amazing, I think after his improvement, if he re-edits it, it will become a superhero story, Thank you for your wonderful effort

LV 1

Kaan_Acemzade247

I've never read such ridiculous fan fiction in my life, this is a waste of time author, I'm telling you, go suffocate yourself with tofu 🗡️🗡️🗡️🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪🔪👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎👎

LV 5

_wise

Good but fast pace ☑️⬆️↗️➡️↘️↖️↕️↔️↩️↪️⤴️⤵️⤵️🔃🔃🔄🔙🔛🔝🔚🔜🔜🆕🆕🆓🆙🆙🆒ℹ️🅿️🈁🈂️🈳🔣🔤🔡🔢🔢7️⃣8️⃣8️⃣8️⃣8️⃣0️⃣0️⃣🔟💠🔷🔷🔹🔹🔹🔣#️⃣*️⃣🈁#️⃣🔡🔠