/ Fantasy / Reincarnated Magus
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The MC of this story is Atesh. He was born in a world of magic and as a child, he dreamed to be a Magus, a title given to the greatest mage.
He lived with this dream until the age when his affinity was tested so that he could pursue his ambition and dream.
Fate was a cruel lady. Atesh wasn't destinated to be a Magus. The result during the affinity testing shocked him to no extend. As a result, he blacked out.
But, deep inside him, there was a thing that was more powerful than the wicked fate, the desire and revenge in his soul. He being blacked out made this caged soul, come out.
This changed the life of the normal boy called Atesh and changed his fate to die.
Who or what was that thing? What happened to Atesh? What was the result of affinity test?
Read the novel to find out.
Follow me, the author, in this wonderful adventure of the new Atesh as he paves a name of his own in the world and the universe, uncovering secrets of the world, getting revenge and much more...
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Author here,
Hi,
This is my first novel. So, please excuse my grammatical errors. I know the first chapters may be boring but I will try my best to make them enjoyable when I get enough experience by writing them.
To contact me Discord me at NanotechPikachu#6406
For ideas, queries etc
Plz, be patient enough to read this poor soul's book.
I am not writing this book for money.
I would like if you donate to me. If you didn't also, it's not a problem.
Discord link
https://discord.gg/keCdeXMpGJ
Plz do join and make it s,uccessful!
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This book cover is created by me with the help of Mathepid. So, credit to her.
Thnx
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I find your narration skills good. The way your story is developing is perfect... Plot also has so much potential and I find your story interesting.. keep going buddy.
The book was the most fascinating I've ever read. The characters are superbly portrayed, the language choice is fantastic, and the plot is surprising. Every chapter has a shocking turn in it. The process of reading never ends. I want to read this book through to its wonderful end. You must read this book or you'll get addicted. devoted author😋💖
Writing quality needs to be improved but concept and plot are interesting and characters and world background are well described and keep releasing new chapters 👍👍👍
Even though it is not a typical genre I go for, I liked it a lot. The plot is intriguing. I am looking forward to read more chapters. Keep up the good work author 👍
The consept and plot setting is nice, Author has good sense of narration and I loved the characters settings too❤️👍all the best author. [img=recommend]
The story is interesting and the story development is also good. The author did a good job in portraying well. Overall, it's a book worth a read. Keep up the good author. Fighting !!!!!
the author cleaned up the first 30 chapters and it made a huge difference I have not read the original chapters however after the cleaned up chapters were finished I could see the difference in quality. up until the end of the first volume the story is riveting appears to have a clear direction and has excellent characterization. starting with the second volume the author became more and more insecure and so continuously asks the readers if he's doing okay. At this point (the second volume)the story becomes a different novel still very creative but a bit more chaotic , all the way up to the paywall the chapters get shorter and half filled with 5-7 author notes and requests for donations. the decrease in description and character development leads to a short summary of the books action, replacing immersive story with a bland digest version. I made it to ch 71 before I stopped, perhaps it improved later. but my review is an average chapter length.
Dropped within 13 chapters. The story is too cliche for me, if you can make it past 15 chapters, you might like the story and can continue it.
A very good novel with a lot of potential, and a really good author at writing, the story is on the right track. I hope that it continues with this rhythm and that it does not end halfway like many other stories. GOOD LUCK!!! KEEP IT UP!!!
Wow!, This book is simply amazing, I really do love the narrative technique, the story line and the characters design... I give the writer a 10 out of 10... keep up with the good work author 😊
I like the names of the abilities, the place Astria and the main character Atesh. It's a new outlook on magical affinity, much different from the ones I'm familiar with. I do feel like there was a bit of info dumping in the first chapter as you tried to explain the world background all at once. I advice that you do that in part and parcel later on. When new things are introduced then explain them, don't put them all at once in one place so as not to make the story too stuffy. Lastly, after the scene with his mother in first chapter, the paragraphs following were too long. I advise nothing more than 10 lines. ML fans have divided attention spans, the shorter the paragraphs, the better. Overall, a very nice story. Keep it up, author.
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Love this book! Although there are mistakes in your grammar, I'm sure you'll get better with time! Continue to do a great job author. Keep it up
Awesome, Interesting and Captivating The story is interesting from the start and it keeps getting better as it progresses. The content and idea of the author is superb. Just one suggestion: Use paragraphing in a better way to make the novel even better. I loved the novel and pls continue uploading new chapters. Best of luck for the future author.
Interesting story concept and premise! The infodumping makes things a little difficult to follow, especially in the beginning, but otherwise an interesting plot and main character
Descriptions are top-notch making the readers immersed into the story while still allowing the readers imagination to be creative. Story development is good and the MC is smart and most importantly, new and unique ideas. Well done. Keep up the good work.
Author here. I know that I overdid it by giving 5 stars. There are lot of grammer mistakes in the chapters so readers please forgive me for that. I am not well versed in English. I hope you all support me by voting and giving Powerstones. I will try to make this novel more entertaining. Thnx