Joshan_Jo

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Joshan_Jo
Joshan_Jo
1 years ago
Posted

The story is interesting and is a potential one, however I need to say there is a lack of description at places, which makes it hard to imagine when reading. Also, at some places, it's confusing, like it's just happening because MC wants to do it without any motivation behind his actions, also, the first chapter is a bit confusing. So if the author could spare some time to edit the initial chapters, I can say it will reach more audience. Keep up the good work author

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Joshan_Jo
Joshan_Jo
1 years ago
Commented

instead of directly coming to dialogue, maybe we can add a para or two explaining the world background he teleported to

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Joshan_Jo
Joshan_Jo
1 years ago
Commented

omg!! this is such a nice carefully pieced para

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Joshan_Jo
Joshan_Jo
1 years ago
Posted

Overall, the story is good and so far it's interesting. The writing quality is also good and the character designing and development is also going smoothly. The author did a good job in giving descriptions about world background and I enjoyed reading this novel. Keep up the good work author

Joshan_Jo
Joshan_Jo
1 years ago
Posted

I liked the fl character, who is strong and stands for herself. The story paced well and the author did a good job in describing. The character designing is good, as well as the writing quality. Overall, it's a good story and worth one's time. Keep up the good work author

Joshan_Jo
Joshan_Jo
1 years ago
Commented

lol

Trace immediately spun around and started to run. He would not fight that thing- it would dismember him before he landed a punch. And even if he did, he doubted he would do any real damage with his scrawny frame.

Reborn as a Goblin - Road to Mastery

Reborn as a Goblin - Road to Mastery

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Joshan_Jo
Joshan_Jo
1 years ago
Commented

yup...so be afraid of crazy ppl, hehe

'No one ever touched me. To think she cut me with her sword …. She is one crazy lady…'

The Majesty And The Red Dragon

The Majesty And The Red Dragon

Fantasy · redlady

Joshan_Jo
Joshan_Jo
1 years ago
Commented

it isn't

Trace sighed. "Well, shit. I'm starting to feel like this isn't a dream." He said, flinching as another roar echoed through the area.

Reborn as a Goblin - Road to Mastery

Reborn as a Goblin - Road to Mastery

Fantasy · TheOneWho_Asked

Joshan_Jo
Joshan_Jo
1 years ago
Commented

it's isn't

Trace sighed. "Well, shit. I'm starting to feel like this isn't a dream." He said, flinching as another roar echoed through the area.

Reborn as a Goblin - Road to Mastery

Reborn as a Goblin - Road to Mastery

Fantasy · TheOneWho_Asked

Joshan_Jo
Joshan_Jo
1 years ago
Commented

duh.....

"She should take a rest …. maybe finding a husband would make her life easier."

The Majesty And The Red Dragon

The Majesty And The Red Dragon

Fantasy · redlady

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