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"Crobat I choose you" said Koga
Strength : Elite level
As our new Ash/Oliver saw this he is feeling nostalgic
Now that he thinks about it should he choose Pikachu or Charmander?
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This is a translation of Pokemon : Wisdom series
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เขียนรีวิวThe translation is honestly horrible, if the author fixes it up the story would probably be really good. It is a headache just trying to read it.
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this is a 3-star story at most as a whole. The main issue is that at chapter 176, Ash is 10 years old, so there will be nothing adult related at all and all, and interactions between the mc and other people due to his age just seem meh. The second problem is the lack of creativity in the fanfic. While the story is bearable, it is neither good nor bad. The last problem is that the translation at the beginning could be rated 5 stars, but from chapter 75ish onwards, degrades to between 2 and 3 stars. TLDR- 10yo mc is ok for a few chapters, but not 150. - Bearly no originality from anime - Translation goes from good to bad
Pacesing sucks otherwise good Revert thing is awesome and really good except for the pacing good story a good amount of changes to the original. Everything is good except for the paceing
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author review I will upload here in mass, ash will not have his powers reset nor will pikachu and pokemons will evolve
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