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Pokémon: The Ultimate Adventure of Ash (Remake)
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Our protagonist has failed in life, his wife denounced him, he spent years in prison and when he got out, he discovered that his ex-wife had been having sex with his best friend.
Alone, without family and friends, our protagonist decides to commit suicide, when suddenly he meets a strange man with whom he exchanges words.
This man gives him a strange ring and then he’s gone.
After his departure, our protagonist commits suicide and reincarnates in the Pokémon world as Ash Ketchum before starting his journey, what adventures will our protagonist have? How many Pokémon will he catch? How many women will be in his harem? Discover it in this exciting new adventure full of action, romance and lots of sex!
*Note: This is a remake of my previous Pokémon fic. This fic is rewritten from 0, it is much better written, the conversations are much more fluid and with more sense and the relationships are much more elaborate, in addition, each girl will have a background.
Important things to know about this fic:
- Sex will start from chapter 15 more or less since I do not want to rush into relationships.
- The girls will quickly fall in love with the protagonist but it will not be instantly.
- The protagonist has a very original system never before seen, if you want to know its functions, you will have to read the fic.
-The protagonist will catch all Mythical Pokémon and maybe some legendary.
- All characters from my previous fic will appear in this without exception.
- I’ll do two or four films.
- Only certain events will be the same as the canon, but 90% of the entire fic will be made by me.
- All the most important pokegirls will be in the harem of the protagonist, if you want some other girl either invented or belonging to the anime or video games, you can suggest it, because probably I will not reject any proposal.
- There will be no Pokephilia.
- There will be no Netorare.
- There will be a little yuri, but only during sex with the protagonist, the girls will not have sex with each other without the protagonist, in addition, there will be little yuri, so it will be fun to read it and not frustrating, believe me.
- There will be chapters every two or three days due to lack of time, I would like to upload one daily, but unfortunately the translation takes a long time, also, I have another fic to upload.
My patreon: patreon.com/Bloodnight79
There, for a small price of 1$, 2$ and 3$, you can enjoy 5, 10 and 15 chapters of this fic and another one and in the future even more things will be added.
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New chapter is a great surprise, i would never expect such a twist, so great work and good job,
Hello im glad your pokemon story is back from the dead from such long time.!!! if you need help go ahead and Ask me.!!!
Sou um fá de Pokémon, sempre procuro alguma historia interessante para ler e essa é uma que eu tenho achado. Espero que continue com o bom trabalho não se perca nas criticas, minha nota não é maior por que a historia ainda esta no começo, ainda espero ver onde vai ela. Uma dica nada contra harem mais não junte um monte de mulheres so para fazer numero, isso geralmente acaba estragando a historia. Tudo de bom e espero que continue com o bom trabalho
Author should not limit pokemon known attacks with just four moves it's annoying it's like a default to prevent them from getting too strong
I like this story, it's quite entertaining to a certain extent, but if I had to point out its bad points they would be the following: 1) The romance is too fast, I understand that there may be many romantic interests in the future, but literally profess eternal love on the second day knowing each other is terrible. It would have been better for you to lengthen the travel time between cities or the time they spend outdoors, you know to get to know each other better and so that love is not so forced, you could have used short jumps in time and told the facts in a correct way and concise if it seemed too difficult to you. 2) The way he catches shiny pokemon so easily is baffling, apart from the fact that it would be impossible to find a group of charmanders in the wild (on a very busy route), the fact that he finds so many shiny ones so quickly in the story It's not funny. It's been 4 or 5 days since he was reincarnated and he already has a complete team and two girlfriends for the second gym. 3) The dialogues are too forced and unnatural, they seem like something processed by a computer or a kind of Chinese translation. I mean it's not the worst but it literally kills my excitement watching the dialogue and descriptions. 4) And perhaps the most critical point, limiting movements to only 4 makes no sense in reality.
Overall story is pretty good but the reatriction of only four moves only is the reason for 3.8 review staus from me because it's not the real world seting as author mention so only four moves is a bad decision to limit pokemon growth if author change these setting and freely allowed moves to learn without forgetting previous moves than i will change my review
great story like it so far continue doing good job ............................................. .............................................
Haven’t read it at all but I like your old pokemon story and since this is a remake you get 5 stars on everything
this is good, it started off great. I hope it keeps up the quality of the chapter. also do you have the link to the original fanfic/mtl? I would like to read the original to see if it is good or is it like other mtl I read (mostly trash)
Ótima história de Pokémon boas histórias sobre Pokémon espero que possa escrever mais capítulos porque sua história está realmente boa 🤔😁😁😁👍👍👍
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so... a good story so far, the 18th scene was well developed, good pacing I am a defender of the harem and I hope he can develop the massive harem in a light way, without getting lost or lacking time with the girls
tres shiny el juego tiene un bug [img=En tu cara] me gustaria que el sistema que consigio no sea solo para empoderarlo. me encanto la version 1 donde el prota los entrenaba a los pokemon y estaban al borde de evolucionar cuando llegavan a los gimnacios. el unico uso de un sistema que no genera demaciado inflado al MC para no poder empatisar , es darle 1/20 algo genial(revestimiento metálico), 3/20 algo normal(superball, pociones) y 16/20 algo horrible (una botella de agua). para que no sea una muleta
So Ash will be having his own Nurse Joy huh, That's very cool.