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Naruto: Time Traveler

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นักเขียน: Sycore_w

4.37 (23 เรตติ้ง)

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MC reincarnates in the world of Naruto with ability to control time and travel back in time, that will help him survive but not make him strong directly.

To climb to the top MC have to rely on his own capabilities and build up his own strength himself, as he don’t have any bloodline or exceptional talent to rely on.

Story starts slow and MC will not become OP any time soon but he will work all the way up to the top eventually. If you prefer novels where MC is strong from the start – you won’t find it here.

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There will not be any harem and probably there will be no romance either, or maybe not, let’s see how story would progress. But definitely no harem!

I will focus on the realism, darkness and cruelty of the shinobi world, so there will be some violence, gore and occasional unfairness, and story might be a hardcore one compared to most of the Naruto fanfics.
Also, I have to admit that early chapters are bad, like first 20 chapters or so written quite poorly, but I’m improving as time goes. So, you are warned, don’t read this fanfic if it’s a problem for you.

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Updates: 5-7 chapters a week, no fixed schedule.
Chapters in advance on patreon /SycoreNovels.

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Sycore_w

Shameless 5 start Author review. Update after writing 30+ chapters: I have to say, that early chapters contains a lot of mistakes and lacks quality, so be prepared for that. I'm trying my best to improve as I go, and later on chapters become better, but I still have a long way to go to achieve the level of quality I want. So yea, I'm a newbie author with English as a second language, I'm doing the best I can, but early chapters is really bad and I don't think I will ever rewrite them, as it will require a lot of time and I'm already struggling to publish chapters once a day, so that's that. As for the story itself - well, it's progressing, and the more I write the more excited I become about what will happen next. The MC will become stronger gradually, there will be some fights, different kind of missions, and of course more time travel. We will see how it goes.

6mth
ดู 5 การตอบกลับ
R0B
LV 2 Badge

It's a good fanfic, but let's get real, mc doesn't have time powers, he has the limited ability of transfering his consciousness to his previous self and somehow each use uses up all his spiritual energy (for example he wanted to return 1 hour to the past). This is annoying, because you can do so much with time powers: stop, slow barier (jjk six eyes), gravity (because gravity is a combination of space and time), recovery, bring back from the dead, time paradox explosions (delete button) and etc, the imagination is the limit..

6mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Rak
LV 5 Badge

Good start, till now no actual time travel happened but its early days. In my opinion author is bit slow in the story tho.............................. give it a try i guess

6mth
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
Black_Reeper

I read up until chapter 24, here’s my review: Great grammar and writing quality, character are written well and the pacing is really good, the time travel ability is a unique aspect that makes it more unique than other Naruto ffs, the MC gets stronger by training in a time loop… But I’m Dropping this ff for one reason and that’s because the MC tells Itachi that he’s a prophet (has a kekkei genkai) that can see the future and wants to stop Itachi from following the plot. Now this might not be a bad thing for others but I just don’t like this path for a Naruto fic…If u don’t mind that then this is a great Naruto ff

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4mth
ดู 3 การตอบกลับ
YourDad_

It's still early to say anything.. but it seems like a promising novel with good amount of World Building and Seemingly a MC that I will not hate at the very least..

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6mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Neo_Night

Don’t mind me I love any story with time loop

5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Herbivore

That story have a great potential ! the time travel power have a lot of possibility, author-san make a great job to structurated that (please don't make that to complicated later). I'm very impatient to see how the MC will deal with his futur friend or love after they forget him or how the power will evovle later !! Don't hesitate to read that story !

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6mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Mister_Robot

This is a wet dream of an Itachi fan. The story starts off fine then it becomes "the adventures of an Itachi meat rider". Terrible fanfic.

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3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Amomon
LV 14

Good read! It’s good as in very good haha. The time loop will make even you crazy tho 🤣

4mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Tactical_Make_out

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4mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Kxkashi

I can see you put a lot of hard thought and time into this. I just can't put in the effort to read all that. I'm a simple reader, I don't like slow paced stories. I just wanted to give you 5 stars for your effort. Keep it up.

4mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Jordi_Hardiansyah

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5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
escobe
LV 12 Badge

This fanfic has great potential. The time rewind cheat is useful for both the MC and the author himself. Not only is it good for the MC to escape from danger, but it is also helpful for the author. If the author makes a mistake in the story, he can close the plot hole with a rewind. Lol.

5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Rodrigo_Rodrigo

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2mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Random_Entity

This is pretty good! I’m glad I found this novel when it has a good amount of chapters already. Ngl you can’t trust me with the power to go back in time, or be able to control time at all really. I’m only human after all.

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3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Notmatter

It's a good novel, thank you for writing it <3 ................................................................................................................

3mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Vaassaav

Love the story and the idea 👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌

4mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
ShadowDialga

Excellent Naruto fanfiction so far ! (chapter 54) The story is really slow but it's to be expected of a story about someone not extremely talented but with an infinite amount of time in his hands to compensate quality (talent) with quantity (efforts and accumulation). There are some grammatical mistakes here and there, but nothing too dramatic, it's perfectly readable and even better than just readable. The story has a lot of details and a bit of character growth with time so far. The author seems to have though a lot about his story seeing the concept he brings up and how they are explained, and how the MC is not too OP despite having the cheat he has. Long story short, someone who knows the plot of Naruto reincarnates as a random character in this world, he can choose the cheat/talents/clan he has within moderation and chose the time control ability. The ability grows with him and only allows for time travel in the beginning, to give him a lot of time to train despite his normal talents. I highly recommend reading it, good job author !

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4mth
ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
Mr_HonestReview

I rated it highly because some reviews are fake. It's not a perfect fic but the author is taking it seriously. Author I hope you're doing well and thank you for this fic.

2mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ

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