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Don't you hate it when you wake up and you don't know where you are? Me too, except I woke up in another universe. A semi SI OC story.
THIS IS NOT MY STORY!!!
[If you want to read original story go to https : //www.fanfiction . net/s / 11943924, I'm just uploading on here for comfort reasons lol]
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เขียนรีวิวIf this is the one where sakura dies in kanoha crush Then it is really good read it mo regret Not because sakura dies, i just don’t want to spoil it more than that Unfortunately it went on a forever hiatus at ch 90+ and it left at a really interesting point
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์great novel tbh, i think the mc is overly emotional compared to other shinobi who have suffered similar pain to him, hes also too forgiving but all in all his reactions are realistic and acceptable. A question for the author is when the original story ends at ch 75 will you continue it?
เปิดเผยสปอยเลอร์It's not bad, although it bothers me that the MC is a reincarnated but does nothing, it feels like the author wanted to nerf him before he even got any power, he doesn't even use his knowledge, I understand that he might have forgotten some things but that excuse only works if the MC put in effort training in childhood, but although I repeat he does nothing, it would have been better if the MC had not been reincarnated, there I would have believed that he would only train when he was on a team
It's good story for me so pls more ch making yeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeye,e,e,e,e,yeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeye,e,e,e,e,yeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeye,e,e,e,e,yeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeyeye,e,e,e,e,yeyeyeyeyeyeyeye
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It's an A.U fanfic with random changes not caused by the Mc. Furthermore the knowledge he does have, he doesn't use. The story is kinda rushed, particularly the academy portion and almost 0 world building is done. The Mc is also extremely unlikable and lazy, not making use of his unique situation at all, aside from unlocking his own chakra. By the time of his team assignment we have a very limited understanding of his abilities or his chakra amount. All in all, the mc is very annoying, and lazy. He enrolled in the academy just to slack off when he doesn't even want to be a Shinobi aside from the power, to use as protection. Realistically, he could train on his own as a civilian if that's all he wanted. The writing itself is fine, and everything is understandable. Even some good humor mixed in, but the Mc himself is simply such a waste I can't read any further.