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Marked by the cursed Darksign, Naruto Uzumaki finds himself tethered to two worlds: the unforgiving lands of Dark Souls and the shinobi realm of ninja. How will a world of Dark souls face a Chosen Undead with chakra? And how will the shinobi world confront a warrior reborn in the Lands of Lordran?
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One of the Best, if not The Best beginning I've ever read in all my time in Webnovel. Sentences roll Smoothly, Long satisfying chapters, No Repeating Sentences and Characters have actual Depth and Morals. From what I can see of this promising fanfic is that the author of this fanfic is truly passionate about his work, I hope you continue that way. 🤙
A genuine review. For me, this story is a 4.8. The character interactions are well thought out, the world-building is interesting, and even the Souls world is incredibly well done. I absolutely loved what you did with the NPCs. The only reason I’m not giving it a full 5 is because of a few moments that frustrated me—not because they were bad, but just due to my personal taste. I personally prefer a protagonist who’s more intelligent and doesn’t take much nonsense (basically: near-perfect). It’s a bit of a childish preference, but that’s just how it is for me. Seeing how Naruto interacts, how the other ninjas act around him, and his lack of sharpness when it comes to figuring out certain important things he’s overlooking really frustrates me! But that’s not nearly enough to make me dislike the story. In fact, it’s actually a great thing—it shows how well the author has given Naruto a consistent and solid personality instead of making him bounce between “perfect” and “idiot” like many fanfics tend to do. My only concern is the future of the story. Personally, I’d find it ridiculous if, later on, ninja world characters became as strong as Naruto or somehow ended up in the Dark Souls world (for example, Naruto bringing them there). I really hope that doesn’t happen. BUT, even if it does, I definitely won’t drop this story. The author has proven to be highly capable at writing and developing the plot, and when they do something questionable, they provide solid reasoning behind it. So, I’ll always give the benefit of the doubt and see where things go next. Excellent work—keep it up~!
I legit never do a review. I mostly just give power stones. But please x20… don’t drop this. This is an amazing and beautiful piece of art. This is actually amazing and got mad that I have to wait for another chapter. I 100% recommend this to anyone. Even if you haven’t read Dark Souls; it is like reading an original series. 5 stars no problem.😌
It would be better if the story flowed more according to the original story. ...................... . .......... ......... ........ ......
Absolute PEAK finally a good ds fic, keep cooking author, you're making a lotta people really happy hehe . . .. .. . .. . ... . . . . . .. . .
good stuff. well written and the story is interesting. sadly it's not a premade novel. so i have to wait for the update.
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Very good book. Well fleshed out ideas behind the combination of the dark souls and naruto power structures that allow for loop holes and insane scaling. I think your version of the characters do a great job of resembling the original source material while extrapolating how things would and are changing because of the new additions to the story. Naruto being a little edgy is good for his health I think and the only time I cringed at the writing was the Kiba incident but it wasn’t enough to break immersion so whatever. I am a little annoyed by the misunderstanding arc with Kakashi rn but it is understandable and written well enough that I don’t mind it too much. I hope that it get cut down soon with at least Kakashi or someone else pn the team to feel that release of “at least someone knows”. But thats just me and if you want it to spiral out of control I’ll still read it. Very entertaining. Much cool. 👍
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Honestly, I didn't have high hopes. I read this because I needed a new story to keep me busy because nothing else I read had updated. This blew me away. It was honestly really good. Way more well-written and even emotional than I expected. Interactions that are so cliche in Naruto fics, like dealing with Hiruzen, actually felt fresh and good to read in this. This stands out as a good, unique blend of two worlds. I came looking for copper and I found gold. This one's in my library going forward, for sure.
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Good start, nice way of blending the world. I don't have much knowledge about Dark Souls, but it is quite intriguing. The only problem I felt was the use of "Oh Kami", it just destroys the flow of the story, as the rest are delivered in English and "Kami" is japanese. There is nothing wrong with using it, but as a reader I felt it disrupts the flow of the content as I read.