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MHA: Demon Slayer Swordsman
4.33 (23 เรตติ้ง)
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Having the body and talent of Yoriichi Tsugikuni the strongest demon slayer in history how will our mc conquer MHA.
I own nothing on this, only the oc characters.
Cover not mine, if the creator of this requests to remove it I'll gladly remove it.
First time writing so expect some mistakes
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Only 9 chapters are out at the time of this review but the story has a good start so far. I'm basically writing this to hopefully keep the author motivated to write. There are too many stories with great beginnings that are too quickly abandoned and this story has alot of potential so keep at it and have fun with it.
I may sound somewhat harsh but there are quite a few cons- 1- There are a lot of problems with grammar. 2- There story setting is somewhat cliche as well as forced. 3- The MC of the story is unnecessarily nerfed. The pro is that the stability of updates is great.
it is wonderful................................................................................................................................
The story starts with the mc wishing for Yurichi's talent and appearance. He gets all swordsmanships of the DS world and for some reason, his emotions. He refuses to take All-might's quirk, saying that it's cheating and that he would do it with his own quirk (Demonslayer swordsmanships), but also gets (the avatar) bending abilities out of nowhere. MC grows too fast. The story feels bland, honestly. I believe that he should have been born as a Todoroki but with Yurichi's sword talent. Because multiple powers from other animes messed up the fanfic so bad.
So Far so good, The idea of it is nice and The writing quality is good as well so i am excited for more chapters.............................
Loved the story, MC is smart and adheres to his beliefs. MC is super strong, smart and just. Please dont drop, its rare to find MHA x demon slayer fan fic
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A great book worth my time...............................................................................................................................
Just a bland character. I enjoyed the concept but I think it was poorly executed. Thanks for writing.
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Honestly this story is just beautiful for me and I believe with just a few tweaks with the grammar it will something even more amazing than it currently is. AUTHOR PLEASE UPDATE 🙏🙏
the story's fine and all I see alot of people talking about how yoriichi has emotions when he shouldn't you have to remember it's not him it's someone with his abilities and sense of justice I do agree with the talent though that doesn't make sense even if it is a mixture of to different people one that has the talent and the who doesn't I know it was used so he could further the story so that doesn't matter to me either than that I hope you keep on updating this I don't know why you stopped maybe bad reviews from the small amount of people This FF seems to be pretty popular and Im kinda of feeling that your missing a opportunity by not continuing
Классный фанфик автор! Пожалуйста если это возможно не бросай его. Идея хорошая и исполнение идеи ничуть ни хуже моя оценка 4.8/5 если бы было стабильное обновление то 5/5 . Автор я в тебя верю 👊
don't trust the other 5 star reviews. the mc don't have emotions. or it's just the author being absolutely terrible at expressing it. nerf. The author underestimate Yoriichi talents, abilities and strength. it took him 1.5 year to slash a boulder in half. mind you that tanjiro did it in 2 years. as someone who's regarded as the most talented swordsman, it is severely lacking. The speeches of characters sounds off. terrible even. sometimes it just makes you ... cringe. the author makes the mc use fire breathing in the forest and didn't even thought that it would cause forest fire. the plot have a lot of holes in dem. the mc ask for yoriichi appearance and talents. but the author decided to give yoriichi emotions to for some reason. overall? 3 stars at best. not the best, but not the worst. it needs to be refined a bit more.