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Here's the revised and polished version of your story for better grammar, flow, and clarity:
Anime & Comics · THE_GreatRed
author can you please use " " to mark sentences spoken by characters
Author is copying Original Link- https://novelbin.me/novel-book/gilgamesh-in-dxd#tab-chapters-title
A 20 year old has a better chance at assassinating a world leader than Axel freeing Zeta.
Book&Literature · Snollygoster
very good keep it up!👍 ...................
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Anime & Comics · Katahama
+1
Slytherin: Manipulative harry, Alchemist harry, Wrong boy who lived, Martial magic, Genuinely good Dumbledore.
Anime & Comics · Vegeta_Kakarot
Make him loki
Nah, I'll Win
HP: Magic Punk
Book&Literature · kamidemond