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Reborn as Chu Feng, remember his past life but there is no knowledge about the future.
I don't own Martial God Asura or Chu Feng's picture, this is merely a fanfiction.
I have removed the No harem tag for the time being.
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Chu Feng without a harem ruins the entire story considering almost every girl in his harem are integral parts of the plot in the novel **. Yes I already know somebody pretty much said this in another review but I wanted to make sure it's said a second time to really stress the fact that without his harem almost the entire plot would be f*****
i think having no harem in this series is better for us. most girls in series are ugly. and they cant follow mc for high place. honestly i can only count few girls on finger that could stay with mc and help him through his difficult tasks and be relevant to the story the original author of novel drop all 3 girls away because they were useless for the plot and waste of time
incredible how many bad comments, but mainly for the reason of not having a harem ... what an idiotic reason as a mga has to have a harem or it will not be good ... the story so far is good and you are criticizing for something without reason, give a chance for the author !!!
Chu Feng without a harem ruins the entire story considering almost every girl in his harem are integral parts of the plot in the novel **. Yes I already know somebody pretty much said this in another review but I wanted to make sure it's said a second time to really stress the fact that without his harem almost the entire plot would be f*****
It's pretty much the original novel from what I've read so far. Nothing new besides him remembering his past life. If he had said past life experience then why isn't he using it? He feels like the ignorant and naive Chu Feng from the novel.
It feels like the mc is still the original author's mc, the mc doesn't have any knowledge about MGA in this fanfic, his past knowledge from earth is useless, it's a torture for reader that knows about MGA because we knows our new fanfic's MC is a new copy chu feng with only little change, it feels like reading original MGA and that's boring me to the end.
So much bad reviews just because of no harem. I mean there are literally 100 or more harem novel out there just read those. I know that in the main novel MC womens played a big role but remember that this is a fan-fic. And @Neelthakur(author) bhai tu liktha acha laga tera fan-fic padkar. 🤘
I haven't read the fic yet but I see there's a lot of low stars review is simply because of the "no harem" tag...... The Hell? It's not like relationship between a man and a woman can only be lover, they can be friend too or am I the weird one here? Consider there's a sh*t ton of novel that's not a harem got turn into harem in a fanfic and most people don't complain, why can't there be an opposite as well? People are being unreasonable, the review section is to review about the story itself, who care if it's harem or not? It's like giving a bad review to a story simply because they don't like the genres of a novel, it's ridiculous. Thank you for your hard work, author san.
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OK I tried reading it. I read all the reviews.and this is what I got... If you want to draw MGA fans. and you do not want it to be a harem make your own unique MC not in Chu fengs body....Its like writing a DxD as Issei and hating girls and hating boobs and he wont join any peerage cuz he is edgy...ya it will be boring crap...GL.
Best Martial God Asura novel.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍Best Martial God Asura novel.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍Best Martial God Asura novel.👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Well I did not like this story mainly because of few reason 1. Mc doesn’t have extra golden finger other than original. If that was not enough he doesn’t even know about MGA. Which feels like Author is just writing original novel with few tweaks. 2. No harem - MGA novel an no harem is like cookie without milk. It just doesn’t feel right. 3. It just doesn’t have the spark to hold you to read it. After about 30 chapters I was bored to death. I just couldn’t keep reading anymore . It’s my opinion. But best of luck with your novel. Others may like it but I just feel it didn’t have the spark to keep me interested
MGA without a harem, trashhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
adorei o começo espero que continue a escrever. Gostei do ritmo com que a velocidade de cultivo do protagonista está progredindo, afinal a linhagem dele faz com que até o nível semi ancestral marcial ele possa cultivar sem gargalos. Muito obrigado pelos capítulos
better than the original!!!....................................................................................................................................................
Awesomse , don't be a harem novel pls🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗☣️🤗☣️☣️🤗☣️🤗☣️☣️☣️☣️☣️☣️☣️
What I would like to see is a Cultivation Novel with a Love interest that is actually competent and doesn't get overshadowed completely by the MC until forgotten. Harems are great and all but there's really no point to them unless they can actively or passively help the MC. As for Harem members being necessary to the plot... they aren't you can simply have the harem girls saved by MC who was paid to do so
The writing and execution is quite good. But the harem thing really is a bother. It wont be this frustrating to read if you make another character as your novel mc. Making og mc not have a harem is kinda remove the motivation to read this. Cuz you cant help but compare and remember the og while reading a ff. It wont be much if your mc is another guy, he can have just one partner and it will not be a problem but if you choose a harem king in the og as your mc and take away his girls... then it lower the excitement in reading this. The result is already in front of your eye. Even though your writing is good, better than most in the top 50. It still did not even reach top 100(for now). It really is not much if you dont want to have a harem, but choose a different mc and not the og mc. You can make an oc with a different and better advantage/bloodline or be a twin.Beside your mc in this ff already take a different path than the og mc. If you want eggy as the partner there many different path to take. Like be a twin and you got eggy and he got the cat or extracting eggy.
Excellent plot and hero is not thinking with his lower body he actually understood strength is respected ... I like it and don't drop the novel in midway please🤗🤗🤗🤗😊😊😊😊😊
I hope you don't drop it. I also hope that Xue Ji would have a different future unlike in the original. . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .
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I don't know how you'll do it if not for harem...who you'll choose among all of em.....Cuz it literally downright changes the plot like, if you don't take su sisters then there's no moon immortal plot and then no xuantian interaction....and if you gonna opt between xue ji and eggy then you gonna what let the cat take her and get cucked or leave the divine body zi ling and get cucked or leave everyone else and get cucked ....I can see you getting cucked everywhere.....you know what makes a novel good in my opinion, you can **** whatever you want in the plot but you can't effectively try to interfere with the actual genre and if you're doing it to a great masterpiece, you'll have to provide sufficient reasoning to back your thinking not a lame excuse like he got killed by his girlfriend and he won't love girls.... But since you put the romance tag, it would mean that he moved on but he still isn't accepting them then why is it so? We need justification..