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The story follows an adventure of a Mortal who was initially due to his high Karma deeds was given a chose to travel from world to world and fulfill his desire to learn new things but soon slowly finds himself in the middle of becoming a Janitor for the gods, Watch as he goes against all the odds and raise on his path to Godhood. His path is of destruction and Chaos filled with Bones, blood, and everything in-between.
The novel is my very first work so kindly go easy on it.
I don't have any copyright over any of the characters or things used.
I'm weird, Novel will be weird. Open to listening to ideas and build a better story. Comment and review your thoughts.
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SAO: Wuxia. Must I say any more? The grammar is google translated, and the author seems to be Chinese. Expect inconsistencies, if you do attempt to read this. Why the hell did it have to be wuxia?
NTR ALERT NTR ALERT NTR ALERT NTR ALERT Mc's girl in one of the world goes around to kiss some boy after promising the mc to supposedly wait for him to recover. P.S. If you Delete this i'll flood the reviews with this everyday
Well can't really give you 5🌟 only spammer do that. Writing Quality: the writing is good no errors easy to read Stability of Updating: well its new its not been 3 days yet and alreay have 7 chapter but i suggest only release 2 chapter per day or 1 chapter per day or 3 chapter per weak so as to relax sometimes and not to have writers sickness Story Development: in naruto arc or chapter 7 is the best scene or MC done so far being naruto not being soldier for other Character Design: meh you didnt even visualize the apperance of MC on SAO World Background :havung fox summon realm is good addition to existing World Background
Only got about 10chapters in before I decided to drop it. Writing: Sucks, as everything seems pretty rushed and nondescript. Doesn't really describe characters or specifics, and thereby comes across as more of a generally summary as to how MC goes from 0 to a Gary Stu. Development: Pretty much rushed, due to timeskips all over the place. MC goes from being 2 to 5, then teenage, and all we really glean in the story is topics he's trained or a company he's founded. Even after jumping into Aincrad, there's no real character or game breakdown. He basically just enters and solos or masters everything with AI assistance, and the only thing described in depth was a few boss fights, if that. All in all, if you can ignore the typos or writing quality, you might enjoy the novel since it's a decent wish-fulfillment OP MC kinda story.
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I already left a review earlier having read the SAO arc and now leaving the review getting through part way through Naruto. There is no character development. There is no story development. It is a summary of what the author seems to want to have done in each anime. Rushing through the mc's decisions makes the entire read feel like an attempt at a trailer of a movie series.
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Need more dialogue and when there is dialogue you need to slow it down by adding a description of why he is saying what he said or add some way to describe the MC emotion.
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I have a saying if you are doing a fanfic you already have the world building is up to you what you do with it. Main character- not developed -1 The story feels really rush -1 Character are so flat that it makes me believe that planet earth is flat and not a sphere -1 The beginning was somewhat good 1 There is barely any dialogue -1 Okay we start whit a 5 we calculate everything and our final score is 🥁 a [2]. This is complete wish fulfillment fanfic. Ps: my real score is a [2] not a 2.2 just in case I hate decimales.
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author, also, in passing through the world of ('shinma mao no testament'), take the sword of the village of the heroes, ejejej. ...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
It's very entertaining, sometimes you just want things to go perfectly right and that's what you find in this series. I hope you keep it up.
I think this story is good, it's just that you need to explain some descriptions of some things [maybe(?)]. Well, thank you for writing it. I hope you don't drop it.
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What MC does is to be stronger and go to another world without or with a small part of the strength that he collected, then he begins to gather strength and knowledge and enters into romantic relationships and begins to gather strength and knowledge and moves again with a small part of this strength and it repeats to the point that I get bored
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This book would’ve been very good if the writing was better . Basically what I’m trying to say is , is that the idea was good but the story was bad. Well in my opinion. Mc bacically goes to worlds then dies then goes to new worlds. Cool right? But nah , the whole story just feels like reading a summary of a book. There is barely any dialogue at all. first SAO world and he gains a bunch of power with his company blah blah blah he likes Asuna blah blah blah they grow old and new world. Goes to naruto world and gets op af but that doesn’t matter because the writing sucks and there’s barely any dialogue between characters. In naruto world towards the end he takes everyones chakra , absorbs Kaguya and is able to modify his body however he likes due to constant experiments and absorbing 10 tails making Kurama a 10 tail as well. I don’t even know wtf is going on most of the time. After that blah blah chooses to reborn again in hp world. But guess what he can’t use any chakra lmfao. So all that power and hard work is literally for nothing. Boring af in hp there’s also no dialogue. I actually fell asleep reading a chapter , wasting my Friday night.... hp world he likes Hermione but he let her go with Ron without even trying to fight for her soooo yeah he’s also a loser . I normally wouldnt care for reviewing about a bad story in my opinion but it’s crazy how everyone in the review section is giving out 5 stars like it’s candy
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