Lannister's Sin of Pride

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The_man_The_myth

Seems good but we all know it will be dropped in a weak if that

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AllenCross

The update speed and quality are excellent, but it's just boring, the character is one-on-one like in other fan fiction about all-powerful and all-knowing main characters who do not experience the resistance of the world. In the beginning it was just super, the story was able to catch, interest, but after predictable events in the family of L. Everything turned into banality. At this point in history there is no highlight. So for now, only if there is nothing to read at all.

LV 4

Aledamonkey

The gimmick here, like in this author's other currently updating fic, is that the main character has an extremely nerfed ability that he does not use and that his mother dies no matter what.

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Naveen_Aggarwal_6572

I think the character of eskanor has not been taken at all as in these chapters MC is not showing pride he is potrayed as a scheming & shrued character whereas as it was beneth escanor to make these kinds of backstabbing plans or lying to anybody as according to him only weak men needs these kinds of plan and his pride would'nt allow it.

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Mastarius

this fanfic covers only the boring portions and from others chatacters pov the mc is not the main focus so with this little chapters theres nothing interesting going on maybe if this fanfic reaches the chinese numbers of 1000 chapters maybe it will get to the good stuff then but who knows if author can go 50 before drop Writing Quality 4 Stability of Updates 2 Story Development 2 Character Design 3 World Background 4

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Matthew_Hankins

I'm liking this fan fiction that will focus on the lannisters seeing how the most hated family in my opinion baring the Freys grew up. I hope this grows and does not drop the potential is there keep up the good work.

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Baldysalino

Its meh.

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Totallylazytobones

you mother funker made me stay up till 2 am to read this whole thing great job man well written

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Holman

a very pleasant surprise to say the least, I was skeptical at first when I read the summary, but now (after reading 13 chapters) I can say this looks really good. and the author seems to know what he's doing. we need more updates.

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Gd_Sys

moreeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

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bananais_good

it's pretty good and I like the way the author builds up the characters and perspektives

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Sagvey_Ay

More more more more lannister more game of thrones more woman more soldier more gold more ship more loli muhahahahahahahhahahhahah[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=update]

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eggsy

Even though I liked it at first, but when he asked for a devil fruit I really lost interest in reading it again, because I know what the ending is like, The world of GoT doesn't have too much of a threat, in my personal opinion, escanor's character can grow stronger by absorbing sunlight like the original, Making an OP character is good but it depends on which world he lives in.

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Sean_Morabito

The book is great, very entertaining. His pride is very forced though during the section of him berating his own schemes

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CILinkz

this is less Escanor and more generic MC with his name. im not too sure Author knows what pride is but its not really portraited here. its also more tell than show, the story telling is only skin deep, we dont really see anything original compared to canon.

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Alesand

First of all, forgive me for my English, not my native language. Secondly, I like this story, especially the way the author reveals the interaction of the characters, Webnovel readers are unfortunately used to the fact that the hero immediately OP and burns everyone to the ground, not fun. On the other hand, I would like to see as soon as possible how OC will give dragons bream to entire armies and will say that only strength is important, but I understand that this should just be waited for. I give this story a 4.93/5.

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VonBritannia

so far amazing. you just gotta be consistant as the lack therof was what ruined your mcu monk fic.

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LeonardoJrjr

Up to date im liking it, perhaps a bit too biased due to my particular love/hate thing with anything about GoT Keep it up, the whole premise its very fresh and the pacing its just perfectly made for what it looks like as a long run type of story

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KingLettuce

This seems like a story that is well thought out, and hopefully is something that continues for a decent length and actually ends instead of hopelessly continuing into oblivion and abandonment. Keep up the good work Author!!!!! ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… ………………………………………………………………………… …………………………………………………………………………