Lots, just an inordinate amount of water in the text, repeating the same description/action over and over again.
How to destroy a character's uniqueness in one chapter. Learn while this author is alive.
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Overall, the story was good, up to a point, namely chapter 45. Most disappointing is that the author succumbed to the influence of the crowd and just shifted the responsibility for some decisions to the readers.
Can't you, the author, think with your own head? Instead of shifting responsibility for the development of the story to the commentators.
Bastard
Note: Your Choices Have Consequences!!!
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TV · Ninja_King_3834
It's very simple, the author gave a choice, one girl or several. In the end, one girl won. As they say, whatever the author chooses, he still obeys the voice of the crowd.
It's a shame, but as they say, whatever the author chooses to do, he still follows the voice of the crowd......
He'd need to find a way to distract his sister, to keep her heart from reaching out to someone who, despite his charm and valor, didn't have feelings for her.
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TV · Ninja_King_3834
Isn't the protagonist a descendant of the House Reyne by any chance?
House Reyne?
Drawing on the memories of John Falcon, I chose a stylish cut that highlighted my features. After ten minutes, I stared at my reflection, seeing a visage that could rival any noble man, with striking blood golden hair and green eyes that hinted at a noble lineage.
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TV · Ninja_King_3834
Didn't like the chapter at all, the most tasteless and dragged out chapter in the whole story. It's especially incomprehensible how the main character was late to Aubrey and Scout, while he went straight to them, but at the same time Leska was in time for Zula and Zula was in time for Aubrey and Scout..... Complete nonsense.
Mistaken Identity || Star Wars Fic
TV · TheManUnderTheBed