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I Made Up Forbidden Spells, and They Actually Worked?

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After crossing over into a world of magic, Dean Bruce was mistaken for a powerful sorcerer. Though he initially intended to sternly refuse the beautiful woman’s request to become her mentor, she offered him far too much to say no!
Completely clueless about magic, Dean Bruce had no choice but to make up spells on the spot. However, when he saw the astonishing power unleashed by the beautiful woman after chanting his random incantations, he was stunned.
The spells he had carelessly invented… could they really comprehend magic and even forbidden spells?
As Dean Bruce ascended to the pinnacle of magical prowess and became the Archmage, he candidly answered a reporter's question during an interview with the Alliance: "I never understood magic. I just made up a few incantations, that's all."
People were in awe of him—this, they believed, was the true humility of a Grand Archmage!

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4.62

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DaoistS69MXM

Only reason It's not getting five stars is that the author uses both first and last name for every sentence with every character. "Dean Bruce thought this, Dean Bruce thought that." I lose immersion constantly. Just use one part of characters names for gods sake. Never read a novel that does this and I've read hundreds. Please stop spelling the full name every time, and I will change this review to five stars.

5mth
ดู 8 การตอบกลับ
Kurijoben

Something changed. For the first 200 chapters I loved this novel. However, after Chapter 200, the quality drastically drops. - The pacing becomes way too fast - The story reads as if a different writer started writing this and they didn’t even bother to read the previous chapters. - Dean just gets a new personality and previous characters are just gone (system is gone too) The novel sucks now, but those first 200 chapters are still great.

3mth
ดู 4 การตอบกลับ
ACE_KinGz

5 star for first time Review ! !!!!!!!!¡!!!!

6mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
brother_of_Thor

ok for some time pass, some people might also like it the only reason I don't like this becoz the author make everyone look like idiots other than mc, way too cringe and not my type of writing for example if he is riding a good horse everyone is like wow great horse, if I could get that horse i don't mind dying early, wow he must be a great person etc... way too cringe and it is getting hard to ignore it.

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2mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
BigWhiteGoose

I think this novel is well written, unlike some novels that are written at such a fast pace, it is a novel worth reading carefully. The plot is worth looking forward to. This novel needs to be read carefully and slowly to discover its brilliance!

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5mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Doubleyolkeggs

The plot of this novel is also fantastic! I am reading every novel of yours and will recommend it to others! that 's great! Can we update faster? I need more chapters!

5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Juan_Filippa

una novela que la disfrute demasiado y la recomiendo totalmente

4mth
ดู 2 การตอบกลับ
Dangerlives

You should focus your energy on writing this story and not others. This is a good story.Not too much fluff.

5mth
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Yellowpuppy

I just read the first 70 chapters, it's really a good novel. A very interesting novel. The previous comment also mentioned the issue of using full names for everything. This can be considered a minor flaw. Perhaps the author's native language is not English. But it does not affect the quality of this book.

4mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
Yoowen

I have to say this novel is really great, I love it so much! There are some unexpected settings for me! Always able to give me some surprises. Especially for the imagination of some forbidden mantras. Genius!

4mth
ดู 1 การตอบกลับ
ReaderMan

Great novel with fleshed out characters and good world building with and interesting premise, writing quality is good and understandable. The characters aren't stupid and can and do use their brains, so far the plot has been good and I'm already waiting to read the next arc. Keep up the good work!

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4mth
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ShepherdingStars

The first 200 chapters are well written with good depth. I've always been a fan of teaching type systems and getting to see the development of both mc and students. However starting from chapter 201 the quality drops drastically, it feels more like a framework that's yet to be filled in. The system just dissappears along with any character or world details. It goes from a great story to a summary. Hope it gets reworked.

6d
ดู 0 การตอบกลับ
Bibongsensei

Can u make power level list?? Like I don't even know what's stronger grand magus,magus,magi,arcmage,saint,7th tier monster ...like shettt that's 7th tier magus his strong things God dean Bruce is here..... Then ohhh shett that's 7th tier monster turtle it same sa grand magus... U won't know who's stronger...

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