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Once upon time a wise man had said, “All men and women are born equal.”
Well he lied, no one is born equal if it were so people would not be envious, would not desire harm on each other, especially HIM. Him, who is the envy of many, the goal of others, the object of hatred, the object of love and lust of countless, since he first took his breath.
No matter what everyone wishes of him he stood tall and surpassed and flourished no matter what challenges and tribulations stood in his way he broke through them since he first opened his eyes to gaze at the world.
The wise man is a liar, after all how can all men and women are equal when the Heaven’s itself decreed him to be It’s most favorite and beloved child.
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ของขวัญ
-- ได้รับของขวัญแล้ว สถานะพลังงานรายสัปดาห์
-- การจัดอันดับด้วยพลัง 
-- หินพลัง คุณอาจชอบ
45รีวิว
3.63
- คุณภาพงานเขียน
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
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I can’t with good conscience give this story a good review, the grammar is absolutely horrible, not bad, not very bad but horrendous, many mistakes and very poorly put together sentences. The character feel shallow and fake, and the very poor grammar just makes it even worse, so far the world backgroubd is nonexisting so I am sorry author but please get better at english or have someone translate this for you from your language to english, as of this review I have read til chapter 12 and I gave up! Hope you get better!
It's a good novel .it doesn't seem like that at first as there are many dramatical mistakes and plot hole but it becomes better as you read.you should definitely give it a shot.
This is a lame novel. 01. Although the MC is supposed to be the Heavenly Dao Child, his progress and intelligence doesn't match that title. 02. This novel is being sold as a Xianxia, but there's a lot of unnecessary drama. Okay, these two points cover everything. I didn't find the beginning chapters interesting.
the mc seems too naive and good hearted will it always be like this? or will he change ? i hate these naive mc's always forgiving. i bet he'll forgive his parents too who tried to kill him then he had to leave with his aunt to live in a distant village which caused his neighbour to die and aunt to get injured. but he will still forgive them i bet in the name of 'filal piety'. sigh i hope the mc dies and someone else reincarnates in his body. nice story but trash mc ruined it for me
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How much of this did you take from desolate era? you took a ton of cultivation levels from that series can't wait to see what more you'll take from that book.
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I like the story and have recently been reading it and it is fantastic in my opinion and I hope there will be more chapters (currently chappter 496)
in my opinion i believe that this is an awesome story. im currently on chapter 130 and i cant see why the ratings is on 3.8. i mean sure the grammar isnt the best but its not like you have to turn your brain off to read it. the thing it lacks most is the the commas. sometimes its pretty hard to read when theres no seperation and i had to peice some if the words tigether in my mind. anyway im only on chapter 130 and havent read the whole thing hence i cant say anything else other than how its going pretty good so far.
please give some love to this story. It's getting better and better. Yes, there are grammatical problems, but I can still understand the meaning. So yeah, you just need to be a better reader.
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I really enjoy reading your story. Their are quite a few mistakes in the writing but its completely fine to me because not all stories are prefect. i also tealky enjoy the older sisters in the book.
Verei, heid ler a historia e espero nao ficar decepcionada, oh, vamos ver Verei e espero gostar da historia, e days personagens da historia sim espero.
The synopsis only is great. I havent even started reading the novel but im sure that this novel is greatness. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Thanks for the novel 😄😀😁😃🙃😂😍😘😘😛😛🤪😜😝😝😜😘☺🙃😄😆🙃😊😗😚😗😚🤑😝☺😚😊😆🙃😅😁😅😉😊😘☺😘😜😗😛😗🤩🙃😄🙂😉🙃😘😊☺🤪😚🤪☺😙😀😃
I have no Idea on what to say about this book. I had such high hopes when I read the beginning and the author ruined it. First of all, I wish that the author can improve his writing style. Second, I believe that the plot could be adjust because this is kind of ridiculous. Third, the character development can also be improved.
Grammar is very bad. Dialogue is cringy. Couldn't get past these to aspects. Bht others seem to like it. Thank you author for your hard work, this is just my opinion, but I encourage you to keep it up. Writings super hard and the key is to write, it doesn't need be perfect or have everyone like it.
doctor said my heart may not hold on to long. pls relase it faster. maybe i can see more chapter while i am alive. why cannot be less than 140 char.
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