/ Eastern / Longevity, starting from being a chicken raising servant
เรื่องย่อ
Cultivating immortality was too hard, with no Spiritual Root, Wang Ba accepted his lot in life.
He chose to join a Sect, becoming a servant in charge of raising chickens.
But the moment he touched a chicken, he realized that his path to immortality might be a little different!
ของขวัญ
-- ได้รับของขวัญแล้ว สถานะพลังงานรายสัปดาห์
-- การจัดอันดับด้วยพลัง 
-- หินพลัง คุณอาจชอบ
18รีวิว
4.1
- คุณภาพของการแปล
- ความเสถียรของการอัปเดต
- การดำเนินเรื่อง
- กาสร้างตัวละคร
- พื้นหลังโลก
แบ่งปันความคิดของคุณกับผู้อื่น
เขียนรีวิว
The story is great and the goldenfinger is attention grabbing. I was hoping he’d be able to use the ability to he gained more. But it’s just too slow and the MC is too passive. He feels more like a side character than a MC. I get when a weak character starts off they need to walk before they can run. But it feels like a crawl
This is one of the few novels on this app that had actually good translation quality. The plot id also decent, though a bit slow for some. I would definitely recommend it to anyone who wants to read something that has a good translation for once.
He grows old if he loses vitality, but he does not become young, If he gains vitality, he doesn't need to become a kid at least become like a twenty year old, youthful man.
Sorry, it seems like the author has a lot of good ideas. It’s just with the system. There’s so many obvious thoughts of tryout and he doesn’t seem to go down probably for the purpose of keeping the store that he already has in his mind, which is not always the best. It doesn’t feel like the story has flexibility the story A little too obvious that this is the first novel, the authors done don’t get me wrong. I think the author has good talent and potential. I hope he keeps going forward and improving . It’s just the story isn’t for me.
this is a very slow and steady novel. Reminds me of A mortals journey to immortality. I like the slow pace, it shows the struggles instead of the more typical rapidfire improvement with a cheat system. I don't remember reading a livestock breeding approach and it felt novel to me. Definitely worth a read. MC character needs to be fleshed out a bit, sometimes it's a little inconsistent. Not recommended for those who enjoy a rapid cultivation progress or OP MC. This chicken breeding MC is a chicken as well, prioritizes safety over rushing into fights/opportunities.
It’s a good story. I feel invested. Locked chapters are expensive as hell though. Double the usual rate. Why?
The beginning was interesting, but then it felt boring. The best part about system type novels is that MC grows strong fast. However, in this novel MC is more focuses on side quests instead of cultivation.
It started off really well. It was exactly the kind of slow paced story I like. But the author seems to lose the plot like 100 chapters in, just starting up random romance tangent that pops out of no where, it felt super forced. Just really put me off the whole thing.
I don’t rate this book as much as others one of the main issues is to many plot holes that don’t make sense. Also the main character does not have a consistent character it’s almost like he’s a schizophrenic with the way he behaves. He’s nervous to meet stronger people, has an ability to create illusions so those stronge people can’t recognize him, but isn’t the least bit cautious or hesitant to put an insect in his body? Also with his power of illusions can’t he just make himself invisible to those people? It all seems cater to protagonist and the plot even if it doesn’t make any sense. Translations are good so if you want something to read than yeah it’s decent but not enough to spend your time if you are looking for something good.
An interesting story. The progress is slow sometimes and chapters aren't very big, but still interesting
nice read but lacking story clarity. gets easily boring, not intresting. integrating more system notification to mc system and pacing mc development the story can improve
mc migrates into a world of cultivation, the problem he does not have a spirit root so is unable to be a cultivator. mc golden finger allows him to drain or grab life-force, and he uses it on chickens, using his own life-force to transform them into spirit chickens then fattening them up to drain them to replenish himself.